| "In the Heat of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 258 ] |
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 05:49 EDT
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your idea is good, but I cudnt read the entire story cuz Inuyasha was too much of a cry baby and Kagome was too volatile. Your expressions are not on mark. U need to give the characters their own personalities. I'm not trying to offend you, I'm just stating my opinion.
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Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2010 16:10 EDT
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please update.... i know this story is old but i would like to see how it ends
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Reviewed By: bookwrm150 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really really like ur story, but how do i put it on story alert so when u update i get the next chapter? thanks!
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Title: This Story Done?
Reviewed By: wtf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...busy?
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 12:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to read how Kagome reacts to Inuyasha being there and if they can ever get together now.
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Title: Please Update
Reviewed By: wtf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far but do you even plan on finishing it?
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Title: Is this collecting dust? i hope not...
Reviewed By: eternalf8te [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 23:19 EDT
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wow, this story is good, i was dissapointed to end up reading the last chapter and none to follow it. Especially when it was updated a long time ago. I love the way everything was written and how the situation was realistically handled. please, please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 11:50 EST
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I hope "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" didn't drain your muse of her energy because this story needs some attention. I would love to see it get finished.
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY!!!! you had me in tears the first few chapters. Now you keep us hangin..Hope Kagome can forgive Inu... Please update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xxdresstokill [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh Update! One question though, didn't kagome give consent for the actions to happen? She did say yes? I hope everything works out!, update please :)
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Reviewed By: Hoshizora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 15:11 EDT
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Almost a whole year... I wonder what will happen? Something tells me things between Kagome and InuYasha are going to get better....Thanks for finally posting a new chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! I've been waiting AGES for an update to this story... thank you, for finally updating it. I just love this story, and i seriously hope you will update again soon!
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Title: please continue!
Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 16:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't let this story silp! I really like it! What's going to happen next? And why hasen't Kagome gone into the next "Phase" of her heat? You know that "Aunt Flow" part? HMMMMMM?
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 09:11 EDT
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That was such a sad chapter i do hope that you update soon because i want to read more of this story.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is truly wonderful! I've read little fic that has so much feelings to it. I wuz beyond shock when that incident happen. I wuz crying for every chapter; i think. I kno i should understand kags feeling, but i cant help but hate her a little. She knows he cares for her, n he said he would neva hurt her, ne? Then his demon side took ova, n he didnt remember anything! She understands, yet she goes to kouga, knowing he only wanted her for her power!! Kami, i feel it so much for inu. But i'm smiling now, cuz he's asleep, and i kno that by the next chapter kags would wake up n see him in all his glory. Hopefully she wont cry more from fright or some shit like that. I luv your fic alot, especially the New Student and Kagome's Secret. That's the name, ne? Oh, n i posted my first fic some time baq, only chapter 3 is up tho, but can you pwease pwease read it n tell me what you think? My first try, so go easy on me>^__^
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