| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 21, 2004 17:48 EST
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This chapter was very cute and funny!
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder why Duo can't accept the car? Great and funny chapter! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 18, 2004 20:24 EST
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Update soon and keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 13:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is one of the funniest chapters to this story, and I love the way poor Quatre learned his lesson...Don't touch the ice cream while Duo is attached to it, heh. Excellent chapter love the last bit...Looking forward to the next chappie...
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Reviewed By: kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 09:37 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL trowa got attacked by the babysit...hahahahaha....that's hi-larious! i can't believe that Trowa actually got attacked by a babysit and it hit him that bad! oh and Heero owns a pink apron! hahahahahahhaa And I still say that it would be funny if when Wufei came home, he was able to put the babyseat in, in like three seconds flat, *snickers at the thought* after Trowa has injuries to his face and the whole thing... OMG!!! Quatre bought them a car! dude i want to be friends with Quatre now....lolol That is sooooo cool, maybe they can now go out and buy a babysit that's easier to install *Snickers* I can't believe the babyseat has gotten the best of three pilots...man, that's sad *nods* ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 00:58 EST
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HOOOOO! i need to know what kind of car it is!! I only have a Honda,civic hybred. Well its a kool car and whatever and poor Trowa! *RUN ATTACK OF THE KILLEK SEATS*lol that was dumb i fell bad for him and hope that he feels better. Ummm Well anyway i really like the new chap. and can't wait to see what will happen with the car and everything!!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: November 17, 2004 19:30 EST
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wish someone was that nice to me....oh well, update again soon!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 17, 2004 18:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow a car ...Thats so cool !!! I want one LOL,I just love this chapter Poor Q !You don't mess with Duo and his Icecream and Trowa and a baby seat dam does he need help ...:) Just an overall cool chapter please update again soon..
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Reviewed By: Jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't often read in the GW fandom and rarely do I read mpregs. But I saw the number of hits & reviews on this one & decided to give it a go. I was fully prepared to roll my eyes at the silliness of an mpreg fic. But, once I started reading I just couldn't stop and became totally engrossed. This is a very well done story and has been immensely enjoyable! It has angst, action, suspense, emotion, and comedy at parts - a perfect mixture in my humble opinion. The explanation of how he got pregnant was perfect and seemingly plausible, something I haven't seen in the very few other mpregs I've read. I applaud what you have done with this story so far, as well as your writing style, and look forward to future chapters. Thank you for sharing your talent!
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 18:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chappie but you must be sick of hearing it...but its true. Just love all the emotions that you set out in each chappie, and I have never cried so much when reading a story, heh. Love your work in this. Quatre I'm glad to see hasn't gone to far, I mean the mood swing in pregnant people is not very nice and very unpredictable so he's been very lucky so far, heh. I just hope Trowa doesn't do anything drastic with the baby car seat...
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 16:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad Duo. Poor Trowa. Evil Quatre. Great chapters!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: November 12, 2004 00:50 EST
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that was a really great chap. and really funny.I wish Trowa luck with trying to build the seat and all and i hope to see u update this fic soon...ja ne
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Reviewed By: leatre.e On: November 11, 2004 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it neeeeeeeeeeeed more craves it my precious lol hi im leatree a fellow writer you should check out my story in thr originals section called Shiro's love
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 11, 2004 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL oh this chapter was funny ..I loved it ..Trowa is great and will never get the car seat in...please update again soon
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(2lazy2login) On: November 11, 2004 10:02 EST
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i think this hates me...as I was saying lolol Trust Quatre and Duo to pine the carseat off on Trowa...I would so laugh if Wufei was capable of putting it in, in about three seconds flat :P Can't wait to see what happens next ~KIM~
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