| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Title: ch 39
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 04:39 EST
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Chakra!Sex. ^___^ Can't say I've ever seen that done before in a fic. I loved the writing and I loved that Quatre's humanity is as well-defined as his entanglement with Zero. Trowa's (re)actions seemed genuine and I liked that Quatre was -seeing- Trowa anew as he guided Trowa to see him. An intwinement of souls... so beautifu. And Zero is conducting calculations on 'Love'? That.... I think might be important? (or at the very least funny... what with some of Zero's other calculated percentages this chapter) I like that they didn't just smile at each other and then everything was miraculously okay. Hard truths had to be faced, and I think they were. (And now I must sleep, for I've been running on about 5 hours a night for the past week and now I'm dead.)
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 21:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I just point out that Ch 39 has pushed your incorporation of Zero into Quatre to a brilliant new level. Do you intend to give Zero to Heero, once he's mature enough to handle it?
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 13:04 EST
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whoever you are going to pair Duo with, I think he deserves a little more progress in that direction. His feelings of lonelyness are so sharp and hurting that is always makes me sad when he realises that he is alone. And I hope that the next chapter is about Quatre and Trowa and that they stay together. It would break Trowa's heart if Quatre would leave him. Hopefully Quatre get's rid of Zero at the end of this fic. Or maybe sooner.
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Title: Ch 38
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 03:50 EST
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'Tis a lovely spot to stop. Lovely job of interweaving the 2+5. Loved this line: Wufei was a good tactician, a dedicated warrior, a fanatic for his revenge, but what he still liked to do best was hit somebody... And Captain Obvious would state that we're in store for some 3+4 when the story continues. Yay on all counts!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoa! Reading about Quatre's thought-processes while on Zero is seriously trippy. I'm amazed at how well you're able to write something so confusing.
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Title: Ch 36-37
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 15:58 EST
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Gah... I can see why the planning would take a while. So many little threads to connect. I'm glad you invested the time into getting it right. :D Also... you've done a beautiful job with Quatre's PoV. I can only imagine how difficult it is to expunge emotional thought and keep Quatre focused... all while acknowledging that a part of Quatre is fighting the logic of Zero. Pretty, pretty, pretty. I'm so excited to read more!
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Title: Part two
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 15:49 EST
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I was right, wasn't I? She is Trowa's former god-lover, hehehe, I'M A PSYCHIC!!!! Mmmuuhahahhahahahahahaa, erm, hehhehee this chapter was cool but I feel very sorry for Quatre. Not only because he is loosing his personality to Zero but because of the headaches it is giving him. And did they really expect the source to talk plain speak to them? Mythical beings never speak plainly. Lol, I hope S survives his night with the Anima-goddess. It is wonderful that you have solved the problems and that there will be more chapters soon. I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 16:52 EST
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Tar and feathers? No, no, don't worry. It's more like chains and a whip to make you write faster, hehehhee. Hmm Trowa mentioned that he, in his youth, had sex with a god. It wasn't this god, was it?
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Reviewed By: priscel-- On: November 29, 2004 00:16 EST
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"Imp glowered at the Dragon from its new position, and then started making faces again,..." *snickers* the imp is very childish and reflects some of Duo's behavior. Man Salve (sp?) is a crazy ol'lady. Can't wait for uodate!
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Reviewed By: Baran On: November 21, 2004 06:03 EST
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It's great. I had a lot of fun reading it. wat ever you do PLEASE don't abandon it.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 14, 2004 23:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! I can't get enough of this fic! Keep up the awesome job!
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: November 13, 2004 22:29 EST
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Awwwe, isn't the love Wufei and Duo share so sweet? They sound like they are married already. Enough of that, boy this is slow in coming! How many chapters to the end this time? 70? That's my guess. Decent work as always, this is so enjoyable to read, I adore it.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 03:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that was fantastic. I loved the part with Duo standing in front of Wufei, poking him with his finger and then going all: Wait a moment, what did that ugly brute say again? And then within second, bam, not breaking a sweat, winning the duel. Oh, I so do love Duo in this fic. And the parts when he and Wufei gang up together against Svale, I love it. I think, once he and Wufei will start being lovers, the sex is going to be very explosive, hehehe. Who will be on top and who will be bottom? I bet they will fight about that everytime, lol. If there is anything I can do to help your inspiration with this fic, let me know. I could offer you cookies... I make good cookies.. Really, very good cookies.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 00:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So they win the fight and get the prize. And Wufei & Duo are slowly developing their "relationship" while Heero watches in confusion.
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to the last posted chapter after two nights of reading. wow. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm not much for threats of bodily harm. How bout bribes, do they work?
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