| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: D.R On: October 23, 2004 14:40 EDT
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if you ask me ,it's one of you best works. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: DirtyD Momma Cat On: October 22, 2004 19:36 EDT
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I loved 'The Arrangement' so much I went around and started reading your other stories. I'd seen this many times before but held reservations about the story summary. I'm glad I held out so long though. All those cliff hangers would have made me want to exact bodily harm to your person! Now that I've read this I'm pleased with what you did. Again you've made a long road to the path of romance but I like that immeansely. You just don't thrust them into a relationship and beyond OOC actions. This is a great fantasy AU with a fantastic plot. So engrossing, I had to read it all in three days! Love your writing, so unrushed and thought out. Tell me though, I had this idea that Heero was infact born from Centre as a weapon of defense against Juusan. Am I correct? Or even close? My favorite part is still the beginning. Where Trowa found Heero naked after climbing up a mountain even though the bridge was nearby. "Errr Heero don't go that way, the bridge is much easier."
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: Maral On: October 16, 2004 07:06 EDT
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I just discovered this fic and couldn't stop till I finished all available chapters. you can't update soon enough,and No I'm not greedy, not at all!
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Title: 33
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 04:17 EDT
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Great writing in this chapter.... we've got the events on Iwa no Hone, filtered through Duo, and relayed by Trowa. That couldn't've been easy, and you handled it well. *cuddle-glomps Duo* Does Duo need a hug? Is Trowa correct in thinking that Duo understands why he's being left alone? 'Cause really, it could go either way... and I'm thinking... with the dripping blood and all... the poor boy might need a hug, or at least a bracing/gruff display of solidarity of purpose. From Wufei, maybe? Wuffie knew before that Duo was the last of his kind, but now he has a better understanding of that and I think that would affect (increase) his respect for the Jishin.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 03:43 EDT
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Oh my poor little Duo. All alone, just the dead screaming in his head, no one to hug him, to care for him, oh, that is soo sad. It is a miricale he didn't get insane, but I guess he is too stuborn to give in to insanity as he was to stuborn and pride to give in to death when his dead peoples souls invaded him. But it looks like a thin line he is walking. Isn't there someone out there to hug him?
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 02:14 EDT
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The more you write on this fic, the more amazed I become. These last few chapters have left me breathless and broken-hearted. Yes, Duo's been a royal shit, but oh - the horrors he's lived through. Thank goodness Trowa sees and understands, but I wonder at what cost to Duo that clean slate might end up being?
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Reviewed By: priscel *WOW@**** On: October 15, 2004 22:37 EDT
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Oh man that was good and way to end the chapter!!!! I kind of figured that at the end of this walkabout for the others that Duo would relive it through his armor and the pledge. The use of we and all..shesh yes i'm a treky and I could soo hear Legion and the seer multitude of voices that piled up on Duo's as he vowed to end Juusan with the last of his breath. WOW update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Ibuki On: October 15, 2004 21:54 EDT
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I'm a fan of all your works. Especially the ones that revolve around Heero. But this one is so good even without a lot of him. Your stories are truly amazing!
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Title: Loving it as usual
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say...this fic is one of my all-time favorites! I hope Heero gets more mention, since he is my favorite character...I love how you write him. Plus, I'm dying to know the secret behings Heero's existance! ^____^
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Reviewed By: PhoenixMageFire On: October 09, 2004 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, thank you Maldror-sama. I've been egarly awaiting your new works. Even in an AU setting, the characters are so perfectly rendered.
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Reviewed By: priscel *eyes story then blinks* On: October 08, 2004 22:31 EDT
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YA!!!!!!!! TWO updates`!!! "...do not look, just get out of bed and forget it ever happened." lol oh gosh!!! *then whines* WAAA what a note to leave it on! Thank you trowa for caring enough to realize that they were about to witnessed not only the power of Juusan but the destruction of all those Duo held dear! I had hoped that someone would care enough to ask Duo why the Tim was damaged or the reliving of all this would cost him. But respect for him and his suffering falls on deaf ears. *hugs tro* I can't thank him enough for the consolation comment that Duo'd home was beautiful. *her mind's eye at work...* quite beautiful. Thank you sooo MUCH for the update and I can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! You're back. More of this!!! Poor Duo, I hope someone will give him a nice hug after having to relive these memories. Erm, but not Svale, please.
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Title: Back in business!
Reviewed By: vox dei On: October 07, 2004 22:26 EDT
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I'm glad you've returned your attention to this fic! As I've said before, very original. Your Heeros are pretty unique- both this one and the one from 'The Arrangement'. This is good, I find them remarkably genuine/credible. So things are finally coming into focus, and Heero, Duo and Wufei are not out to kill each other. Poor Trowa- Quatre has become a computer. Be honest with your readers- is Svale a partial self-insert (with all that groping...) J/K. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 03:30 EDT
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Yes, a new chapter. Oh, I like it very much. I wish Duo and Wufei would hug each other and admit that they are both lonely. But it is a start that Wufei thanked Duo for rescuing him and saving his life. If Duo would apologize to Wufei for using him as a puppet, I guess that would help Wufei accept him as an ally faster. I wonder what kind of powers Svale has that Duo doesn't want her to use them. hehehe, even Wufei seemed to be impressed by Duo's warning of getting spanked. lol. You really need that long for the next chapter??? Weeks??? sniff, sniff, ohhh, what about cookies? Would cookies make you write faster?
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! This is going to be such a happy little group of fighters. I can tell ;-p
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