| "Demonic Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: link2910 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 21:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Title: The truth about this story Reviewed By: You wish you were me Concieted bastard im onna go bite him. *Finds an bites* Idiot reviewer guy:WAAHH I WANT MY MOMMY!!!! hehehe yup i read this story too
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 21:56 EST
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please to whatever god you belive in update soon. i need to know what happens to their 2nd child!!! shes only 5 for fucks sake ... you cant kill anoutther child. not one that knows what life is! please save their daughter! gods i'm about to cry please!!!!
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Reviewed By: link2910 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 06:13 EST
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ok that idiot is yelling at you when he is too much of a wimp to give his own name. this story is pretty good
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Title: please help me!!!!!
Reviewed By: mirokusgirlsango9161986 On: February 29, 2004 22:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your story. please write more. i have some questions 1. why is naraku such an asshole???why does he try to kill Tsuki??? 2. why doesnt sango have any more kids???she is a great mother to her son 3. why didnt sango slap miroku when she was having her child???i would have slapped him instead of yelling at him 4. i kind of need help with my story. could you please give me more ideas??? i'm giving you a summary of what happens so please give me other suggestions Sango leaves Miroku after she finds him cheating on her with a 14 yr old prostitute. She takes her 13 month old son with her and goes to live with sesshomaru. She sleeps with him and gets pregnant. when she is 5 months pregnant, sesshomaru loses his job and starts beating her because he is upset. he continues to abuse her until she is 6 months pregnant. she gets irritated by it and leaves. she goes back to miroku after he lost his girlfriend after having a child,which he gave up for adoption. he takes sango back and helps her during the last 3 months of her pregnancy. he is the one who assists her when she gives birth to her daughter, Miyu. Sesshomaru is there with her too. she tells him that she's nervous around him. she's in so much pain that she cant kick him out so she lets him stay with her. she finally gives birth to Miyu and Miroku raises her as his own child(sango wont allow sesshomaru to be around her child after he abused her while she was pregnant). 7 yrs later on miyu's birthday kagura shows up. sango is pregnant again so she cant fight kagura. she decides to let miyu and kohaku fight her. they battle to the death in a battle between good and evil. please email any suggestions to me at mirokusgirlsango9161986@yahoo.com. i really appreciate it. thank you! ~amanda~
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Title: GO FIC GO FIC
Reviewed By: Sammy -.-zzz On: February 29, 2004 16:26 EST
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Don't pay any attention to that person's BAD review. This is a really good story. I can't wait till the next chapter! >^,^> "do a little dance..."
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Title: The truth about this story
Reviewed By: You wish you were me On: February 29, 2004 02:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVEN THE TITLE OF THIS STORY SUCKS Demonic Demons? A RETARTED TWO YEAR OLD COULD COME UP WITH SOMETHING LESS STUPID AND MORE CREATIVE DO US ALL A FAVOR AND TAKE THIS STORY OFF THE NET I DONT KNOW HOW I DIDNT GAG WHILE I WAS READING THIS CHAPTER IN SHORT...This story IS THE WORST I HAVE EVER READ... you know what... I'm really sorry bout this but... I really dont like this story I mean the title just pissed me off and the first chapter just pissed me off even more so reallt just TAKE IT OFF THE NET
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Reviewed By: uohana On: February 25, 2004 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update i need the update...I need to know what happens
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Title: noooo
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 17:20 EST
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SHE'S NOT ALOUND TO DIE YOU MUST NOT KILL HER I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN I WILL DON'T TEST ME!!!!!! ok i'm done i love this story it's really good like awsomely greatly good ok well UPDATE SOOON PLEASE i'll be sad lol well keep it up ...Ruthy.....Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: sesshyl On: February 21, 2004 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it and so sad :(
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Title: what?!
Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: February 20, 2004 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the hell!? HOW COULD PEOPLE FLAME YOUR WONDERFUL STORY?! *pulls out gun* Im going to shoot the next person who flames you! Thats a promise! ANYWAYS, its a WONDERFUL story and I thought it was VERY well written! I wouldnt change a thing about it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no this is so sad
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Title: The story
Reviewed By: YOUR FAN! On: February 20, 2004 16:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DogDemonKinoke On: February 19, 2004 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what do you meanit happend to me canareing you annd kag? you dont have to put your answer on A/A you dont ever have to answer. very good, dose inuyasha still love kagome? or will he just dich her and mour for kikyo for the rest of his life? DDK
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Title: hmm...great job!
Reviewed By: BlueRose91 On: February 16, 2004 18:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was rly good. keep up the good work...update it rly soon damnit!
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Reviewed By: fangirlofiunyasha On: February 13, 2004 17:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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