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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2012 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, with just the epilogue left and you stopped writing? This was one of the best fics i've read and now i will never find out how it ends? Damn it... Oh well. You probably no longer care, but i really wish you would finish this story, i really do. |
Title: really?
Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2012 21:33 EDT
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You stopped writing with only the last chapter left? Thats really sad, this was a good story, and I would have loved to see how you ended it... |
Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 19:41 EDT
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*chuckles* well let's see... it took... three months for that last chapter to come out and ... three years since you promised us the epilogue. Sorry girl, I'm afraid you broke that one promise. ^v~ But in all honesty? None of us in the fandom mind; this is my thousandth re-read, or so it feels, and this fic is a spiffing classic. The blend of cultures, the MARVELOUS fighting scenes, the vibrant characters. Girls that finally own their mens' asses, and know how to keep them in check. I'd like to say thank you, in everyone's name, for this precious little jewel you've given us (not little actually; thank heaven!). This fandom misses you, you 'pushy bitch'. ^v~ Midi
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 12:40 EDT
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Gods... It ends quickly, but that really doesn't matter. All those emotions your story conveys... the research, the originallity, the fighting, the spirits, the love... this is a masterpiece as it is, and I am grateful for you writing it. I am not like some, wanting everything to be "correct"... like the name of Inuyasha's mom etc. This is a fanfiction and one is free to use the characters at will. I bow to thee.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 11:46 EDT
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I'm reading this story for the first time, and I've just gotten to chapter 24 - and I'm crying my eyes out. Gods, that hurt! That hurt, that Inuyasha's like that... Although I know how emotions fools one to make stupid decitions, it still hurt so much! Gods! You are a phenomenal writer! I'll review again later on, but... I just had to tell you you struck a chord inside of me - quite power you got there. Amazing.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 01:02 EDT
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I would fight Naraku himself for an update at this point...You wouldn't really let me do that would you???
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 21:36 EDT
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i guess it's safe to assume that there won't be an epilogue... but either way i really enjoyed your fanfic... it was one of the best i've ever read... and it really gave me hope because i was starting to believe that there were no more good inuyasha fics on this web site anymore... also i believe nzinga was a really good character and you developed her very well...
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Title: mmm...
Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 19:13 EST
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"A/N: Not much left now but an epilogue. Hopefully it won't take as long to write as this chapter did." that's in the last chapter.. do you know that it has already passed more than a year, righ? just sayin.. :P
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 05:12 EDT
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~hops around on one foot~ Okay so I've been waiting here for you to update and I really have to go potty! I'm sure I'll develop some medical condition from this...~continues to do potty dance~
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 17:12 EDT
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This still the most awesome story!!!!
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Reviewed By: xSilverShadowsx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very good story here. There's only one major problem that I had when reading this story. You have some very bad grammer and punctuation. Have you ever thought of getting a beta reader? Sometimes it's easier just to have one. They fiz up your errors and other little things. Other than that everything was great. The plot was amazing. I've never read anything remotley close to yours.
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Reviewed By: Rootbeer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 21:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm sure you know that this was a truly excelent story, and there isn't any point to me telling you. But in all honesty it has made me laugh and cry, and it's drawn me into it's oh-so-intricate plot like few other fics, but a number of cherished books, have. I think that you have gift for writing and if I were you, and if I were interested, I would go through and change all of the names, the scenarios a touch, make sure you're free from plaigarism accusations, and try to get this thing published. I believe you could, and I believe it would be successful. I think some of the grammar and whatnot could be switched up, but I'm a perfectionist and it doesn't really matter. In all sincerity, this was a superb piece of literature. Course, that's just my idiot opinion.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 16:22 EST
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Are you going to start writing again because I've started chewing on things....
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Reviewed By: Rootbeer (yea, it's me) On: August 05, 2004 22:34 EDT
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Have I mentioned that I love your story? Cuz i do. LOTS. Sorry I didn't sing in, btw...
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Title: chapter 34
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 14:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, you did a great job on this chapter. I'm glad you took the time to get it right. I look forward to reading the ending when you get to it. jschu25
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Title: Almost done?
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow - I can't believe this story is practically over. Congrats on being nearly finished. Long stories are very difficult to do. I've really enjoyed this story a lot. It's probably been the best Inuyasha fanfic I've ever read. Your writing is very good - your characterization and plots are excellent. Also, you actually introduced an OC that I did not want to kill. That's a rarity in any fandom! Congrats again - looking forward to the epilogue.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (NSI) On: August 03, 2004 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that this story is over already... I can't wait to read the epilouge.. Please keep up the great work. I hope that you have more stories as great as this one was. You're a superterrific writer! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice... I've missed reading this story. Hopefully you get the epilogue done soon!! I'm really looking forward to it! Great work.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: August 03, 2004 00:13 EDT
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~whimper~ I don't want it to be over!!!!! Please say you'll be writing more after this story is over?! I love your writing and wouldn't mind at all being hooked on another of your stories. Oh my goodness I think I'm really going to cry!! That chapter was so sad and it was the last real chapter! I can't take it! I love you though! *huggles you*
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 23:25 EDT
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Girl, it's so great to read an update from you! I still can't get over the amazing story that you've managed to churn out -such rich characters and terrific descriptions of their emotional responses to the events they've been experiencing. I also have gotten a kick out of your combining different cultures/myths into this story... Wow, so much happened with this last chapter..and Kikyo has been put to rest. And I'm glad she redeemed herself..though I still feel that Inuyasha owes Kagome some massive loving/ affection for being so understanding of his feelings for Kikyo. I mean, through the bond she can *Feel* what he is feeling...he can't hide it...and that can't be comfortable for Kagome..knowing the depth of her mate's feelings for another woman.... Hmm... :)
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: August 02, 2004 19:03 EDT
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Wow. I never thought I'd feel sorry for Kikyo, but I really do! This is astounding to me! Anywayz, great chapter, you're finally almost done with the story! Not that I wanted it to end, it was a great story.... but there's still the epilogue! Anywayz, catch ya later, I'll be around for the epilogue!
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Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy and sad at the same time! I'm happy Naraku' dead now, but it means that your amazing story is going to end as well. T__T I love Inu/Kag, but I also like Kikyou, and I cannot be more happy for seeing that you didn't make her an awful person like in so many stories. She died as a hero, and her death did bring tears to my eyes. I simply loved this chapter ^__~
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 02:03 EDT
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*whimpers* Are you ganna update soon??? *starts to cry*
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Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 18:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God!!!! Trust is wonderful!!! \o/ I couldn't let go untill now. I think you did a great job at making the original character, Nzinga is a fabulous mate for someone like Sesshoumaru. And that heartbreaking scene betwenn Inu and Kag made me almost cry, it's so touching (I'm talking about that chapter where Kikyou showed up and Inuyasha defended her). (would you consider letting me translate it and post it at my site, please? I have already your one-shot posted there, The only thing.) Ja ne! Kisamadesu
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Reviewed By: wench On: May 21, 2004 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! But it's so long....is it gunna end soon?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 21, 2004 10:29 EDT
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought you had given up and left me!!!!!!!!!! But I understand about the writers block, I think I'm going through the same thing. Umm did Zi just call Kouga pretty??? He's hot yeah, but pretty??? I know this is going to sound really funny, but has Kanna woken up yet??? hahaha!!!! Update as soon as you can and tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: May 20, 2004 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! You've incorporated much of the Naraku-tachi canon characters in very creative ways. I'm glad that your writer's block is on the way out - can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: April 28, 2004 15:49 EDT
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What COULD keep Zi from fighting? Does she have a pup or sumthing? Anywayz, great chappie, glad u finally updated, hope u update sooner next time!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 02:38 EDT
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OOO suspence. please update soon. i can't wait. Krystal.
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Title: Great start - keep going!
Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: April 27, 2004 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have me hooked! I can hardly wait for the compete update!
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