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Reviewed By: Katina108*notsignedin On: December 20, 2003 18:17 EST
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another great chapter!! I really enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 15:18 EST
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I love this chapter, so kagome and Nzinga are that powerfull together...wonderfull. Please, update soon
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn*notsignedin On: December 17, 2003 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you, this story is my fav...I have you on my favs list....you are such a good writer, i'm in tears, i can't explain the happiness your updates cause me.....thank you and enjoy your holiday
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 12:41 EST
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This is a sooo good story. I start to read this weekend and can´t stop until the last chapter. Who was that guy that Nzinga saved? will the bond between Sess and Zi be rebound? Why Inuyasha didn´t tell Kagome that he loves her and stop with her suffer? i have the feeling that Kikyou is Naraku´s mate and swill bring a lot of sorrow to my favorite couple. And about Sango, she need to make a mature decision, afterall Miroku is trying very hard, he derve it :-) So please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Khyaree On: December 12, 2003 12:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE go on with the story! I just love it !
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Reviewed By: INUROX On: December 11, 2003 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz. write more???? you're SOO good! I'm a junkie on ur writing!
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 07:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always your updates are a joy to read. I don't think that you need concern yourself much over how you write the fight scenes, I think you did very well with them, it's nice to see siege warfare done right and the overall description of the battle was easily played out in my mind as I read. So, pat yourself on the back, you did good ;) . Looking forward to learning more about the characters, heh, especially now that you will be introducing InuYasha's parents into the fray, you are doing an excellent job with making the characters so believable. Keep up the wonderful writing and I'm looking forward to the next update. Have a great time visiting family but don't wear yourself out, though I know from experience that visits like that are hectic, lol. We'll be patiently waiting for when you have time to write and update. Best Wishes
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Congrats on two more fine chapters to this wonderful story. I adore your Zi character. The interaction with her and the other characters is great, especially with Sesshoumaru. jschu25
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Reviewed By: *kagomereborn On: November 27, 2003 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG HOE COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE, OMG *FAINTS*....................
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 27, 2003 05:50 EST
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Don't stop.
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Reviewed By: Brice Humphry On: November 23, 2003 10:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most amazing fanfics i have ever read. The characters are well developed and the interactions between them are very realisitc and funny. I love this fic! keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo that was such a great two chaps, *Pats on back* well done very well played , im glad your not rushing their emotins and really giving each personality life, ty so much for the story and this updates im really enjoying your story immensely :) only one thing a wanted to say was that in the first update your said kag's father embeaced his foster daugther and foster daughter instead of daughter and foster daughter ,,,, ok tha's tha....
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 09:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the new chapters. I think that is one of the things I really enjoy about your updates, that you put up two chapters at a time. What I really love though is how well balanced this fic is. Not only, as I have mentioned previously the character and scene descriptions, but the whole overall aspects of your writing is pleasing to the reader. There are no jumps that throw us off, instead it flows along from one part to another. Also my interest is always kept throughout the reading, it doesn't slacken any at all. You should be very proud of yourself for having such a wonderful talent. Keep up the excellent work. Looking forward to the next update with anticipation.Best Wishes!
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Girl On: November 21, 2003 04:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has to be one of my favorite fanfics that i've read. i love the original plot and you've developed the characters well. i can hardly wait until you update again. i actually check everynight to see when you've updated. i hope you update soon, cause i can hardly wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Sprout129 On: November 20, 2003 16:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing. It is well written. The style is both unique and fascinating. The writter has done an excellent job of constructing the character so that the reader is compelled to feel for them and their sitution. There is a wonderful harmonous balance through out the entire story. The reader is never left in the dark. The movement in the story either being transitions of scenes or from character to character is silkly smooth. Thank you for your creativity and outstanding ability to write and share with us. I do have a question. I don't know if you answer reader questions or not in this chapter Inuyasha tells Kagome of his love for Kikiyo but he doesn't say he loves her (Kagome). He says that they are meant to be instead. I was wonder if that means he doesn't love her (Kagome) or am I getting ahead of myself and should just shut up and read the story. Thanks again!
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