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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 09:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the new chapters. I think that is one of the things I really enjoy about your updates, that you put up two chapters at a time. What I really love though is how well balanced this fic is. Not only, as I have mentioned previously the character and scene descriptions, but the whole overall aspects of your writing is pleasing to the reader. There are no jumps that throw us off, instead it flows along from one part to another. Also my interest is always kept throughout the reading, it doesn't slacken any at all. You should be very proud of yourself for having such a wonderful talent. Keep up the excellent work. Looking forward to the next update with anticipation.Best Wishes!
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Girl On: November 21, 2003 04:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has to be one of my favorite fanfics that i've read. i love the original plot and you've developed the characters well. i can hardly wait until you update again. i actually check everynight to see when you've updated. i hope you update soon, cause i can hardly wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Sprout129 On: November 20, 2003 16:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing. It is well written. The style is both unique and fascinating. The writter has done an excellent job of constructing the character so that the reader is compelled to feel for them and their sitution. There is a wonderful harmonous balance through out the entire story. The reader is never left in the dark. The movement in the story either being transitions of scenes or from character to character is silkly smooth. Thank you for your creativity and outstanding ability to write and share with us. I do have a question. I don't know if you answer reader questions or not in this chapter Inuyasha tells Kagome of his love for Kikiyo but he doesn't say he loves her (Kagome). He says that they are meant to be instead. I was wonder if that means he doesn't love her (Kagome) or am I getting ahead of myself and should just shut up and read the story. Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah ha ! sooo funna great job, diapers hehe, *poor sango*.....
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Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent fic! And while I'm not the biggest fan of OC, Nzinga seems to fitting in ok so far {and what's with her sword?? ^^} You have a good pacing to this story and the plot's an original---I like that. =D Update soon!
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Title: Aditu
Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 09:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As with previous chapters these two new ones are excellent. I especially liked how you dealt with the issue of Kag and Inu's Bond as I had wondered if that point would come up sooner or later. Glad that you covered it early on in the story, though I can see you left enough open so you might be using it still later on..k, enough analyzing finer points, lol, I enjoyed the updates, and still appreciate the way you write. Really getting the feel of this fic even more now and looking forward to when things start coming together. Keep up the great work. Thanks for the new chapters! Will be looking forward to the next one/s ;) (I didn't notice before, but my last review was virtually a letter wasn't it, lol) Best Wishes!
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 09:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it when you update with two chapters! Just like finding money in a jacket you haven't worn in months, lol, but more enjoyable. As before, I really enjoyed the updates. Zi's character is really developing (I'm assuming that is who you referred to when you said that there was an OC that we needed to be patient on). I like her just as much as the Inuyasha characters you are using. Overall I should just say that I like how you are using all of them, Rumiko's and your own. I know I mentioned it before in an earlier review, but I do love how you are descriptive without being overly so, a nice balance that gives the reader enough to imagine it all in the mind but not so much that it seems overblown. I only gave you a 9 in spelling and grammer because there were a few mistakes, nothing bad, I really hope that I didn't offend, it didn't take anything away from the story or anything, just wanted to let you know. I know that proofreading isn't easy with one's own work as you have it already in your mind ;) BTW I got a big grin on my face for that special thank you in your note at the beginning of chapter 7, that made me feel special :) and don't worry, if you keep going the way you are there will be no disappointments. I can't believe this is your first fanfic, glad that you got up the nerve to put it up for all of us to read and enjoy. That's an inspiration for me (I have ideas bumping around in my head that maybe someday will get put down and shared lol). Anyway, I loved the new chapters, made me laugh, blush ;), and everything else with the characters. I'm curious to see what is in store with Zi's blade and how it relates to it's (heh as well as yours) Celtic name (if it's the same Scathach that I'm aware of, not sure if that's where you got it from), my curiousity about it is tingling, lol. K, I've babbled quite a bit now. Thanks for the new chapters and the special thank you (still smiling). Will be looking forward to the next update! Best Wishes!
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Reviewed By: Ickabod119 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 02:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Creative idea you have I am really enjoying this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (to lazy to login) On: November 07, 2003 16:45 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love it! Really! You have to continue this! I can't wait till next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 09:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see you updated, and with two chapters! This is really an excellent fic, I really can't find anything about it I don't like...well other than when I reach the end of the last update chapter that is and have to wait again ;) I love how unique this story is and has completely captured my attention. Can't wait for the next update. Best Wishes
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Reviewed By: lee-ia On: November 04, 2003 19:25 EST
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oh my gods ...i love your story. it was so good the first chapter had me completly hooked.the mystery and the plot is awsome. it's totally origonal too i cant tell ya how tired i am of the repetitive stories!@_@ when i got to chapter four i didn't want it to end. . .your a great author and you have an amazing story, i'm a big fan (not phyco fan by the way! but a fan) ^_^! please update faster then the others (i'm very impationt) i'l be looken!!!
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this just keeps getting better and better! lol, I was happy to see that you updated so soon, this is a wonderful fic and you have a good deal of talent. I'm glad that you are sharing it with us. Hope to see another update from you soon, and keep up the great job. Best Wishes
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: November 03, 2003 12:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Already I am impressed. You caught my attention immediately and held it throughout both chapters. I really enjoy the way you write, descriptive without being overly so, I can picture what is happening and the characters come across as believable. This looks to be a very promising fanfic. I am looking forward to reading future chapters, lol, glad that you say that it will be a long one! Keep up the excellent writing! Best Wishes
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Reviewed By: Mitsue-chan On: November 02, 2003 14:33 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a very good begining, very original, can't wait to read next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 11:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!! This fic is going to be really good!! I can tell. I can't wait to learn more about this alternate universe. Keep up the writing. Ja ne.
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