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Title: Almost done?
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow - I can't believe this story is practically over. Congrats on being nearly finished. Long stories are very difficult to do. I've really enjoyed this story a lot. It's probably been the best Inuyasha fanfic I've ever read. Your writing is very good - your characterization and plots are excellent. Also, you actually introduced an OC that I did not want to kill. That's a rarity in any fandom! Congrats again - looking forward to the epilogue.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (NSI) On: August 03, 2004 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that this story is over already... I can't wait to read the epilouge.. Please keep up the great work. I hope that you have more stories as great as this one was. You're a superterrific writer! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice... I've missed reading this story. Hopefully you get the epilogue done soon!! I'm really looking forward to it! Great work.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: August 03, 2004 00:13 EDT
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~whimper~ I don't want it to be over!!!!! Please say you'll be writing more after this story is over?! I love your writing and wouldn't mind at all being hooked on another of your stories. Oh my goodness I think I'm really going to cry!! That chapter was so sad and it was the last real chapter! I can't take it! I love you though! *huggles you*
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 23:25 EDT
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Girl, it's so great to read an update from you! I still can't get over the amazing story that you've managed to churn out -such rich characters and terrific descriptions of their emotional responses to the events they've been experiencing. I also have gotten a kick out of your combining different cultures/myths into this story... Wow, so much happened with this last chapter..and Kikyo has been put to rest. And I'm glad she redeemed herself..though I still feel that Inuyasha owes Kagome some massive loving/ affection for being so understanding of his feelings for Kikyo. I mean, through the bond she can *Feel* what he is feeling...he can't hide it...and that can't be comfortable for Kagome..knowing the depth of her mate's feelings for another woman.... Hmm... :)
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: August 02, 2004 19:03 EDT
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Wow. I never thought I'd feel sorry for Kikyo, but I really do! This is astounding to me! Anywayz, great chapter, you're finally almost done with the story! Not that I wanted it to end, it was a great story.... but there's still the epilogue! Anywayz, catch ya later, I'll be around for the epilogue!
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Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy and sad at the same time! I'm happy Naraku' dead now, but it means that your amazing story is going to end as well. T__T I love Inu/Kag, but I also like Kikyou, and I cannot be more happy for seeing that you didn't make her an awful person like in so many stories. She died as a hero, and her death did bring tears to my eyes. I simply loved this chapter ^__~
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 02:03 EDT
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*whimpers* Are you ganna update soon??? *starts to cry*
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Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 18:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God!!!! Trust is wonderful!!! \o/ I couldn't let go untill now. I think you did a great job at making the original character, Nzinga is a fabulous mate for someone like Sesshoumaru. And that heartbreaking scene betwenn Inu and Kag made me almost cry, it's so touching (I'm talking about that chapter where Kikyou showed up and Inuyasha defended her). (would you consider letting me translate it and post it at my site, please? I have already your one-shot posted there, The only thing.) Ja ne! Kisamadesu
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Reviewed By: wench On: May 21, 2004 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! But it's so long....is it gunna end soon?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 21, 2004 10:29 EDT
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought you had given up and left me!!!!!!!!!! But I understand about the writers block, I think I'm going through the same thing. Umm did Zi just call Kouga pretty??? He's hot yeah, but pretty??? I know this is going to sound really funny, but has Kanna woken up yet??? hahaha!!!! Update as soon as you can and tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: May 20, 2004 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! You've incorporated much of the Naraku-tachi canon characters in very creative ways. I'm glad that your writer's block is on the way out - can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: April 28, 2004 15:49 EDT
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What COULD keep Zi from fighting? Does she have a pup or sumthing? Anywayz, great chappie, glad u finally updated, hope u update sooner next time!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 02:38 EDT
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OOO suspence. please update soon. i can't wait. Krystal.
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Title: Great start - keep going!
Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: April 27, 2004 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have me hooked! I can hardly wait for the compete update!
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