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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 23:51 EDT
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Arrgh! Aargh! Aargh! You have got to finish this! However, I do think Zi is a bit too perfect. I'm supposing that you are use her berserkerness as a weakness? Anyway, I'm really looking forward to finding out what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: INU ROX! On: April 03, 2004 14:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE??? -INU ROX
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: March 28, 2004 15:45 EST
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Yay! He finally said those three words! Oooh, the battle part's here now, I love battle scenes! They're so exciting! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 21:36 EST
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hey haven't read ur storee in a while!Hehe it sure makes my day!!!!I'm soo glad you finally updated:P Gawd i seriously still cant stand Kikyo, like i feel sorry for her but she's soo.....bitchy! Hehe Zi and Sesshy r such a cute couple!Anyways excellent chappie~Update asap~Lots of Love~Divalicious89
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 02:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! you updated. i love this story! Kikyo needs to die *plans evil plot of death* well i can't wait till you update next even if it takes a million bazillion years, have no fear I will always be here..to review.. LOL Well keep up the good work. update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 22:25 EST
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How could we not review??? And of course I'm sticking with this story, theres no way you're getting rid of me! I am still laughing over Inuyasha being scared of Zi's Gramma!!!!!!! He called her a crazy old lady!!! *stomps foot while laughing*I don't see how Kagome keeps a straight face around him. If I were Kagome I would give Inu the silent treatment for not telling me I look exactly like his dead ex-girlfriend, by the way Inu and Kikyou never did it did they??? *crosses fingers while chanting 'please say no please say no'* But is Zi and Sesshoumaru's baby really going to die??? And I think Zi's grandfather should respect the fact that she doesn't know him and needs time. And where did Zi get that sandwich after she had the piece of pie??? Yay!!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: March 21, 2004 21:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated! This is a great story - filled with many characters (OCC and canon) with their own personalities. You have done an excelent job keeping the story interesting and gripping - please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rootbeer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, it's my absolute favorite and I don't think I've ever said that before... It's so great! I think this is what they call an addiction...^_^
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (no time 4 signin' in) On: March 01, 2004 16:27 EST
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Yay! InuYasha finally said he loved Kagome! And now alluva sudden, I kinda feel sorry 4 Kikyo. You didn't make her out to be such a bad person after all. Anyway, great chapter, hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 14:02 EST
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Inuyasha said it!!!!!!! He said it!!!!!!! I'm soooo happy for them!!!!!! But has he ever thought that maybe Kagome doesn't want to have pups yet??? I'm sure he can wait a little while. But I feel so bad for Miroku!!! He actually cried!! But Sesshoumaru and Zi seem to be having a very nice morning *wink wink* Update update update *jumps up and down*
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (off line) On: February 29, 2004 03:46 EST
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wow, great chappie cannot wait until you update. Keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (off line) On: February 27, 2004 00:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. cannot wait till you update.. Keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:47 EST
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Hey! Sorrie that i didn't update sooner...my old computer has been very messed up so i had to wait until this guy came to fix it~hehehe i love the sango/miroku scene!ooooOoOo and Naraku is a tricky bastard! tsk tsk....OoOO But i seriously can't wait for the kag/inu/kikyo event that's prob gona happen...i hope!!!!hehe i'm sowwie i'm not patient!!I ADMIT IT!~Well lots of Love~DivaLicious89
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 14:03 EST
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It seems Naraku hasn't changed much at all, has he? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 10:17 EST
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Wow! when I saw the notice in my mail box that you had updated the headache just stopped!!! I'm glad I make you smile, it's my mission in life to make people happy, or horny, which ever. Okay did Naraku just call Kagome a cow??? His mama!!! There!, nobody calls my girl a cow, bitch is okay because being mated to Inuyasha she is technically a bitch, but that whole cow thing was way out of line, thats why she blew half his ass off!!!! Oh YEAH, THEIR BAD, HIS SAD, THEIR BAD, HIS SAD!!!! So he thinks he can use Kikyou because Inuyasha won't hurt her huh? Okay yeah he may be right about that one, but Inu can only be pushed so far people!! That was so funny, the thing about Zi's grandma yelling at him about his mouth and he was afraid of her!!!!! But she should know he got it from his mother, that women has a mouth on her that could stop a bull in heat! Naraku thinks he can take on Sesshy in his big dog form huh! I got three words for him, bow wow bitch!!!!!! And you know theres no way Zi would let him go out there alone even if she doesn't remember eveything!! I can't wait for the next chapter! *dances around singing* THEIR BAD, HIS SAD!!!!!!
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