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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 17:05 EST
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i stayed up well past dawn the other night reading everything so far on this story..you have several other writers recommending your story to read..and i have to say they were very right! your attention to detail and fleshing out the characters puts me right there with the story, and i've loved it all so far! to think that this is your first fanfic..you have some talent! one thing that i can't get out of my mind is how kagome just left it at saying how inu will have to live the rest of his life knowing that at that one moment he chose someone over her. argghh! that hurt to read. but that's why kag's so cool. she's a much stronger person than i. my brain's too tired to go into more details that stood out the other night (poo - i knew i should have reviewed then and there but sleep beckoned me)..i look forward the next chap! many thanks
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has been one of the best stories i've read, i really like how the war is kinda like a LOTR war going on!!!I loved how you keep the chappies not too long and not too short and instead you write more chappies!!Super great job hehehe and i love how inuyasha and sesshy are like all friendly and brotherly w/ each other not like other stories where dey are always against each other!!They're both sooo adorable!!!arggghhh but i hate kikyo....damn when you talked about some lady with magical powers i so knew it was gonna be dat stoopid bitch!!!lol sowwie but she can piss me off sometimes but i wish kagome isn't soo nice w/ inuyasha sumtimes...she's too sweet!! But I still luv Inu:)Well hurrey and update asap!!can't wait for the nxt chappie!!!
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Reviewed By: ME On: January 27, 2004 20:29 EST
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Once again, another great chapter--love all the various plot threads that weave such a great story!! can't wait for your next update!!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 11:37 EST
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LoL! That flashback Fluffy had of Zi and Inu was so funny! Hmm...Sesshoumaru was bein kinda nice, rescuing his parents from the siituation like that! Anyway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 10:28 EST
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OMG!!!!!!!! Little Inuyasha urinating all over everything!!!!! I can't stop laughing!!!!!!! Mine! Mine!!!!! HAHAHA Update soon!!!!!!
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Title: WAI! Another chapter!!!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged on] On: January 25, 2004 00:37 EST
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Yup, another chapter! WAI! *glomps* er..... gomen, a little tired and I'm not quite sure what I am doing........ Crips! I thought that that actually DID happen to Miroku... I was going to yell at you for that.*sheepish grin* Then I found out it was a dream! GOOD JOB, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tanya
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 22:46 EST
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I really love thsi story. But i´m very sad about Kagome and Inuyasha...Why can he really love Kagome? When you really love you have no doubts...Imagine the suffering when Inuyasha be with Kikyou...and the pleasure go trow his bound with Kagome...It will kill her...don´t he see? Please, udpate soon
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Reviewed By: jschu25(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I'm glad to see Zi back in the picture. I guess Inuyasha was lucky this chapter that Zi hasn't found out what happened yet. I fear for his ears though. And the start of the lemon but left with a cliffhanger....that was evil. Great job. jschu25
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: January 18, 2004 11:06 EST
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Some times I get like Zi all I want is meat! Sesshoumaru is so protective it's cute!!!!!! Please update soon I love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: ME On: January 12, 2004 20:43 EST
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Well, I figured Kikyou had to come into play somewhere along the way..I just hope she's not too much of a nuisance to Inu and Kag--I mean, she's already caused some problems, although I can understand Inu, he should definitely NOT put Kikyou above Kagome!!^_^ all good stories need some conflict!! update soon~~
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Reviewed By: kisagurl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...............This story is...I mean...WOW!!! I love it so much I hope you update as soon as possible. PLZ!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jschu25(not signed in) On: January 11, 2004 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, love the lemon. I just sometimes wish the Kagome wasn't so nice & sweet. And what was with helping Kikyou?And you are so right about OG&M, definitely a favorite of mine and I feel not enough people read and review it. jschu25
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Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged in] On: January 11, 2004 18:18 EST
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*looks down at Inusdemoness's review* Ouchers, that would hurt... I'm not too sure how you are going to portray Kikyou in your fic, but hopefully she is at least a little nice... after all, Kagome is going to help Inu Yasha go to Kikyou... E GADS!! It better not be some sort of trap!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!! Kagome could never wish something bad to come onto Inu Yasha... she is too nice... although the 'sit' in the anime is funny... anyhow, great job, I encourage you to keep on going and............. 45 reviews just isn't enough for this story!!! I wonder why more people don't review it! Tanya
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 11:11 EST
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Okay I'm not that mad at Inu anymore, but he's still a little stupid...just a little. Sango and Miroku are so cute!!! And what about Nzinga? We haven't seen her, I feel sorry for Inuyasha when she wakes up, she won't be too happy that he hurt Kagome. If I were Kagome I would bury Kikyou in the ground and put a waterhose in her mouth and duck tape it all around, turn it on full blast and blow her stomach up!!!!!!!!!!! MUHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! Update soon!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 16:24 EST
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Damn the bitch, she's back! Kill her Kagome! Sorry, I got carried away, just that I really don't like Kikyo all that much. Anyway, update soon!
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