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Reviewed By: kushimatama On: December 27, 2003 01:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow its really good...i luv it! ur a really good writer, keep writin more stories plz, id luv 2 read em!
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 13:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story soo much. I can't wait to read more so please update soon!!!
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Title: ....... wow..........
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am speachless............. wow...... Okay, maybe I should get over this speachless part so that I can say what I need to say. This is one of THE absolute best fanfictions that I have read in a long time! Don't worry about your battle scenes because they are absolutely perfect! They played out in my mind beautifully. The characters worries are very real. In the case of Sango, her worries over whether or not Miroku(Kami, I cannot spell today) loves her is one fear the everyone has! Please update soon! I am putting you or this story on my favs list... maybe both! Have fun with your family! Tanya-- wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: Katina108*notsignedin On: December 20, 2003 18:17 EST
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another great chapter!! I really enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 15:18 EST
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I love this chapter, so kagome and Nzinga are that powerfull together...wonderfull. Please, update soon
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn*notsignedin On: December 17, 2003 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you, this story is my fav...I have you on my favs list....you are such a good writer, i'm in tears, i can't explain the happiness your updates cause me.....thank you and enjoy your holiday
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 12:41 EST
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This is a sooo good story. I start to read this weekend and can´t stop until the last chapter. Who was that guy that Nzinga saved? will the bond between Sess and Zi be rebound? Why Inuyasha didn´t tell Kagome that he loves her and stop with her suffer? i have the feeling that Kikyou is Naraku´s mate and swill bring a lot of sorrow to my favorite couple. And about Sango, she need to make a mature decision, afterall Miroku is trying very hard, he derve it :-) So please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Khyaree On: December 12, 2003 12:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE go on with the story! I just love it !
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Reviewed By: INUROX On: December 11, 2003 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz. write more???? you're SOO good! I'm a junkie on ur writing!
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 07:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always your updates are a joy to read. I don't think that you need concern yourself much over how you write the fight scenes, I think you did very well with them, it's nice to see siege warfare done right and the overall description of the battle was easily played out in my mind as I read. So, pat yourself on the back, you did good ;) . Looking forward to learning more about the characters, heh, especially now that you will be introducing InuYasha's parents into the fray, you are doing an excellent job with making the characters so believable. Keep up the wonderful writing and I'm looking forward to the next update. Have a great time visiting family but don't wear yourself out, though I know from experience that visits like that are hectic, lol. We'll be patiently waiting for when you have time to write and update. Best Wishes
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Congrats on two more fine chapters to this wonderful story. I adore your Zi character. The interaction with her and the other characters is great, especially with Sesshoumaru. jschu25
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Reviewed By: *kagomereborn On: November 27, 2003 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG HOE COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE, OMG *FAINTS*....................
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 27, 2003 05:50 EST
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Don't stop.
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Reviewed By: Brice Humphry On: November 23, 2003 10:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most amazing fanfics i have ever read. The characters are well developed and the interactions between them are very realisitc and funny. I love this fic! keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo that was such a great two chaps, *Pats on back* well done very well played , im glad your not rushing their emotins and really giving each personality life, ty so much for the story and this updates im really enjoying your story immensely :) only one thing a wanted to say was that in the first update your said kag's father embeaced his foster daugther and foster daughter instead of daughter and foster daughter ,,,, ok tha's tha....
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