| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inky On: March 10, 2004 17:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stand dumbfounded...babbles* oh..my..GOSH! after ALL that kagome STILL cant let go of inuyasha??? hmm. but it is realistic. no one could loose thier first love that quickly. *thinks* yesh, this DOES make the plot interesting, now does it? Please update soon, i REALLY want to know what happens!!! ^___________^
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 13:54 PST
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Hmmm... Sesshomaru should say something! Or they can stand there and cuddle! AH the tenseiga! It should go to inuyasha... then because he's a vampire it will kill him! Oh yea i knew this brain was good for SOMETHING! Great chapter! I look forward for you to update!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 13:04 PST
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YAAAAAAAY! Kago loves Sesshoumaru Kago loves Sesshoumaru! I have NO clue what Sesshou-kun can say. Maybe something cheesy, but good like 'no matter what I'll always be there for you' or something. I like the idea that Inu-Yasha is about to kill the village girl Kagome when Tenseiga interupts and protects her. I thought of a really good line that v.g. Kagome could use when she is about to kill Naraku. hee hee hee! LOVE this story! :) p_q can't wait for the next chapter! :-D
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: March 10, 2004 05:35 PST
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like god where do u get yor ideas man well coolie chappie like always very angust hop[e u update soon cya!
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Reviewed By: little rin On: March 09, 2004 20:59 PST
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Hmmmm.... Curious...... I'd like to write a story using your world, but I'd rather send it to you and have you post it. I also suggest letting someone else do it too because my ideas are...... Well, you'll see. My writing style is usually too sweet for vampires, so that's going to be a bit of a challenge for me, but I think I'll have fun with it. rotten_tarou@yahoo.com. If you don't like my story, feel free to get a good laugh and delete it. Also, I might take a few.... historical and mythological liberties, and it might get a little long..... wait.... look at who I'm talking to!
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Reviewed By: cybersesshyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 19:56 PST
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i think he should try to comfort her but i really don't see sesshoumaru pushing kagome to love inu when he wants her for him self. but that is just my opinion. i really love your story and look ford to reading the new chapters. just so you know you are one of my favorite authors and have inspired me to write again. thou i don't write fan fiction i do love to read it. GREAT JOB MAN well enough rambling ja ne ^_^
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Reviewed By: guffy On: March 09, 2004 15:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IGNORE THE VAMPIRE!!!!!!!!
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Title: AHHHH
Reviewed By: Stormy Nights On: March 09, 2004 09:20 PST
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OMG kagome must return to normal at least for sesshomaru AHHHHHH NORMAL
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Title: *heh heh heh, burn baby, burn*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *mm not letter her log in again, sigh* On: March 08, 2004 23:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow wow WOW!! The tens I'm giving you for these vampiric chapters are sorely unfitting. 20's would be better. This is... wow. Definitely the most unique world so far. Your explanations of the world seem perfectly fitting. Especially, all the references to religion and great historical locations associated with religion such as Constantinople and Jerusalem. I can't explain the awe that I feel right now. And when you mentioned the "Shogun" of Japan and his vampire wife. (even the "general") WOW! I didn't realize that you would not only meld history, vampires, and religion, but also Rumiko Takahashi's manga/series so well together! In the other worlds, there isn't a connection to the others and Kagome's time. In this world... there IS. And wow, WHAT a fusion!!! (Can you tell I'm all psyched up and read all three chapters!?!?) This is by far your best world yet! And I haven't even gotten to the Sess/Kag stuff yet... *jaw drops* When I read Sesshoumaru's words about Tenseiga and being able to use it's true power... my heart lept and ached in the same moment. (I can't spoil it!) And now Kagome's fight... *sniffles* Oh Sessho.. Damn, What an offer! But she needs to remember the power of temptation and persuasion that they use... it's just a trick! If she gives just ONE inch... it will take a mile and consume her soul! WHEN she wins (and she HAS to!) and has some time alone with Sess, she'll probably cry about her decision. And when she tells him her fear... what will HIS reaction be?? (Can you tell this is one of the most facinating facets of the IY universe to me??) But I believe that he will love her all the more for it. ^_^ Again, awesome awesome AWEsome three chapters of the vampire future!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 17:06 PST
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Hee hee hee I LOVE THIS STORY!!! ^________^
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 17:06 PST
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DESTROY THE DAMN CURSE!!!! Just have Sesshou-kun a) give her a potion that will give her his life. b) mate with her and have him give her some of his power and his life span c) have them go on another quest to obtain something that will give her a demon's life span or d) Have the souls of the Shikon no tama allow her to make a wish where she can a) become human, hanyou, or demon as she pleases, or b) gives her a demon's life span
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 16:40 PST
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Hey, Kag-chan doesn't make a bad Vampire. I can really picture her as a vampire! ^____^ You know just how to make this story perfect you know, I haven't been disappointed at all! ^______^ Peace and Cookies!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 14:01 PST
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WOAH VLAD? VLAD?! This is one diverse story! AWESOME!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 13:51 PST
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woah. 0___0
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 13:12 PST
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Ohh Sesshy-kun, don't worry your Kagome will love you eventually....SHE BETTER! The poor guy hasn't had much happiness in his life, having his brother take the one thing he cares about (other than Rin) would be cruel and unusual. Ohhhh*runs over and gives him hug*It'll be alright.
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