| "It all started with a Nameless Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: July 14, 2004 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You were doing Great, but then the whole male domination thing makes me gag, sorry! I know you'll fix it to where Kagome and Youko are close if not completely equal. How you make that happen will be fun to see! Don't think I'm flaming you! I'm not! I'm just saying that domination of anybody by anybody is my least favorite part of any fic. If you don't want to change that then that's your choice. Ultimately it is evan after my rant is a GOOD fic! This is a very origninal and intersting fic! Update and like i said before if you want ignore my rant! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Fox Fire 626 On: July 14, 2004 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is really really good, but is the yu yu gang going to make an entrence when/if Kagome goes back to the present? Plus, where is Youko's counter part, the bat demon, his partner in crime? (I can't remember his name right now, srry.)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 02:23 CDT
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I love this story. I think it is really great and unusual. Yeah most fics have Kagome turn or was a youkai in a disguise. Very vew have her as a hanyou. And even fewer or only one have it caused by an unconscious wish by a flower. The interaction with Youko is very interesting and worth while to see it played out. You got a good plot work with it. Explore it more. Don't just do a chop shop ending. You make it to where this is just the beginning. A story is always never ending like life, we just make the stops at points. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: shadownekko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't stop!! It is the end of summer and alot of people are on vacation, readers will return. Never fear.
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Reviewed By: suggestion... On: July 13, 2004 23:28 CDT
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hmm.. i know you are... on writer's block and currently have no ideas. maybe instead of asking people for their own ideas you should hand the story to someone else. ^-^ oh and... sorry for the no capitalizing stuff.. im... lazy. -nod nod- ooo if you get mad of this 'suggestion' you can simply ignore it. and, it'll go away... i think. o.O okay it wont go away but umm.. ignore this. -nod nod-
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Reviewed By: KoishiiKarasu On: July 13, 2004 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........Yoko......(starts drooling) :3
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Reviewed By: badassreviewer On: July 13, 2004 23:02 CDT
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I thought that the new chappy was great! I read it the other day and I got caught up with something so I came back today to review. Sorry bout that! I hope to read more soon! Writers block so sux big time!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: July 13, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey your story is great I really like it. and don't worry about the no review thing my story hardly ever gets reviews :*( . But your story is really great (could have killed over the teaser) but as long as you keep writing I guess I'll let you live.hahaha PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW PLEASE UPDATE SOON IT WAS GETTING REALLY GOOD & I WANT TO KNO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT :p
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Reviewed By: DragonsHart On: July 06, 2004 17:16 CDT
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Hey, you said youd make the next chappie about Kag/Sess. Why? i mean Kag could find Kurama in her time...
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE(not logged in) On: July 01, 2004 20:13 CDT
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Oh my update soon chap 12 is good.
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Reviewed By: -____- On: June 28, 2004 17:04 CDT
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Why'd you have'ta kill Youko?!? Grr... -_______-
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!!!!! That was sooooooo good!!!!! You have to up date soon!!!! you have 2!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: guerro On: June 18, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can u please update it i really want to know what happens
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Reviewed By: Lolly Pop Princess of Geiko On: June 15, 2004 17:33 CDT
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UPDATE!!!
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