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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic ^^ You ended it very well!!
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Title: Love It
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really liked it you should try and write some kind of sequal. I would be really cool, but anyway it was really good. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: name's Hiei81 On: August 11, 2005 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great ending for a great fic! I LOVE this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ja
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Title: AWESOME DUDE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inus Gurl On: August 05, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE!!!! I absolutely LOVED this story. I thought it was kinda ironic how Kagome and Inuyasha turned out to be consilors (
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Reviewed By: I'm Hiei81 On: July 23, 2005 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lovin it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMFG! Oh, sorry bout your Dad. Don't know if it's the same thing but, when my Grandma died i didn't talk to anybody for a whole week. And the day before she died we had an argument. I left saying some not so great things... I didn't even get to say sorry... Ya... Don't ever do that. It leaves you feeling shity inside.... So, umm... Good job with this chapie. I love Inu/Kag lemons! I keep coming back to read it over and over and over and... You get the point. In the future you might still see my name becouse I'll probelly(sp?) keep coming back. Well.... I'll leave with some wise words: never eat the yellow snow! Seeya! -Hiei81
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 20, 2005 07:16 CDT
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My condolances. Thank you for the chapter, it was excellent. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 22:37 CDT
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A note on Chapter Three...eighteen hundred hours is actually six in the evening...
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Reviewed By: Still Hiei81 On: July 13, 2005 01:05 CDT
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Sorry. For got something. You need to write an Inuyasha and Kagome lemon!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Name's Hiei81 On: July 13, 2005 01:00 CDT
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Sorry bout your Dad. Ouch, cancer? I love this story beyond all reason. Every five seconds I laughed. Fluffy, a clown?! lmao!!!! I think he would be hot as a rock star though.But that's just me... I think i already reviewed for this but... well... I love this fic! I don't know how to stess it any more then that! Kikyo shood die a horable death... or get hocked(sp?) up with Naraku. Sorry if my spelling is off. I can't spell worth shit. Anywho! Up date as soon as you can. And good luck with your Father! -Hiei81
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Reviewed By: BlueThunder13 On: May 25, 2005 20:45 CDT
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hey there, i have read your story many times and it is really good. i am really sorry to hear about your father, i truly am, cause i know what it is like to lose a close family member, i really hope that you have a great time with him for as long as you can. i am sorry if i am just going on and on but i am sorry, and i hope that you keep on writing your great story... have fun YAY! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 12:45 CDT
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*jumps up and down* I pick 5. I Loved your story! UPDAT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PUDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: dark sapir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 20:43 CST
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please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Crescent moon walker On: March 27, 2005 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story soo many time, and it is the greatest!!! I almost died laughing! Anyway, what you can do to Kikyo is have her fall into the punch bowl, or get knocked out by the Kagome!! Or better yet, have her drop down and die ^_^ ( No one aint gonna miss her!)Naraku, I say, should dress like a donkey's ass and Kouga should dress like a cross dresser (If you like Kouga, sorry for this comment, but, he already looks like a cross dresser.)I hope this would help you out! Update soon! CMW out!
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Reviewed By: Blade_the_vampire_slayer On: March 18, 2005 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic. was great! and you know wher you said that you needed ideas for Naraku and Kouga it sounds like they should be togeather. lol. jk. Well I loved this fic... And maybe you could make Kikyo go with Naraku and Kouga with Ayame or even the single twin counceler.
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Reviewed By: i'm Hiei81 On: March 15, 2005 04:32 CST
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I swear this is one of the best fics i've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!
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Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 12, 2005 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!! it's hilarious !!!! and for the qquiz thingie i vote for * 5 * lol ...update soon!! it was totally funny!! : )
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Reviewed By: dj On: March 09, 2005 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
5 this fic is great You should get hojo and kouga drunk and have a gay experience love this fic it is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: linz On: March 09, 2005 22:57 CST
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very funny, i love it, i would write more but i'm in a rush! love the story update soon!
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Reviewed By: BlueThunder13 On: March 09, 2005 22:05 CST
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omg that was really good... and on your quiz thingie i think you should do answer number 5 when kikyo ends up with naraku and then falls into a lake... that is the only thing that that bitch deserves... excuse my language... but thanks for updating and i hope update soon... and by the way... naraku should be the devil or something... or maybe a bunny rabbit... with the big suit and all...i don't know about kouga... but i hope that you can come up with something soon so you can update.... thanks for writing such a good story... and i hope you update soon... thankies bunches...bye
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Title: Kouga
Reviewed By: NordicaVB still not signed in On: March 09, 2005 21:58 CST
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Hmm, for Kouga you would have to go with something like a King or Zeus...you know, that whole 'king of the gods' act (well, he is a 'prince' you know). Can't really think of anything else for him...unless he goes as the President. OH...how about a sheep, so he's like a Wolf in Sheep's clothing. As for Naraku, he should go as a Pimp or um...I don't think I can say that here, but how about he dresses like a man that likes to dress like women. Sorry, best I could do. Hope it helps!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: March 09, 2005 19:50 CST
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YES! YOU UPDATED! I AM SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Military time
Reviewed By: NordicaVB not signed in On: March 09, 2005 19:41 CST
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Okay, someone may have mentioned this already...but since you have not fixed it...military time is based on 24 hrs. the AM begins at 0000hrs (zero hundred hour) (1200AM). eight in the morning in 0800hrs (or eight hundred hours). 1:00PM is 1300hrs (thirteen hundred hours). So 10:00PM is 2200hrs. I would suggest, if you have time, fixing this mistake because it is a little distracting.
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Reviewed By: godess On: March 09, 2005 18:12 CST
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I really love reading this fic, every time I read it I laugh so damn hard I love it, I'm going to be sad when you Finnish it though, but I still can't wait till the next update so update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 09, 2005 16:49 CST
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Excellent chapter! That was too funny for words! I think I'll vote 1. Again. I think. I have an idea for Kouga and Naraku...the front and back end of a pantomime horse. I have no idea why I have that idea but it just seems to fit for those two... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 19:30 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC! its so funny..plz update soon
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Reviewed By: ayngel_fire On: February 16, 2005 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love reading this fic, every time I read it I laugh so damn hard I love it. can't wait till the next update so update soon!!!!!
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Title: i just found you, and i love you! *not that way you homophobs!* 2!
Reviewed By: aly-oh-mally On: February 14, 2005 22:48 CST
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IT CUT ME OFF, THE FUCKER HAD THE NERVE!! hehe, my friends say im bipolar. want a tootsie rool? SANGO:hello? she needs to come as Laura Croft. FLUFFY:drag queen RIN:a naughty angel SHIPO:ROBIN!!!(BATMAN) KIRARA:catwoman. sexy hallie berrie outfit too. HOBO*ehem*HOJO:what do you think? a hobo. KIKYO:a VERY nasty lookin wanna be play boy bunny. NIRAKU:a jiggalo. GOOD LUCK! I LOVE YOUR STORY! i totaly wont be offendeed if you dont use my ideas, but i hope you consider them! and have kikyo + niraku fall in the lake when there trien to get the grove right, cuz shes too lose!!! please UPDATE!!!
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Title: i just found you, and i love you! *not that way you homophobs!*
Reviewed By: aly-oh-mally On: February 14, 2005 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU!!!! your story TOTALY kicks ass! youre my new idol! ok, sorry, kinda weird today. not to mention the fact that ive just found your story and ive fallen hard. oh well. ok, apart from youre beyond awsome story, and the beyond increadably awsome randomness! *yah!* i got some killer ideas for the costume party! INUYASHA: the night in shining *silver* armor, cuz i think he would look dead sexy!! KAGOME:i totaly want her to be in red and black, so i think she should be a vamp. cuz shes the actual inocent one, and what costume party is there without a suductive vampire? MIROKU:i think he should be that one guy who runs around in a white botton up shirt, socks, brifs, and sunglasses. >_
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Title: Costume Ideas
Reviewed By: Kawaii_Kit On: February 12, 2005 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol for costume ideas, I think Shippo should go as a Pirate, and Kirara should be his wench (lol, he should have a chain that is attached around kirara's neck;D) ummm who else... Yura should be dressed as a scantally(sp?) clad devil lady, Kagura should be dressed as Yuna from Final Fantasy X-2 (lol), Kanna should be dressed as an angel... she's always reminded me off one, regardless of the fact she is evil in the anime... (I don't hold it against her)... Kikyo should be dressed as the local whore, wait... she already is... Damn... lol, ok now that that's out of my system... Sesshy and Inu should dress in their kimono's that they wear in the anime, and that's about it... Just a suggestion! Keep up the good work!
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Title: uhh here's some costume comments
Reviewed By: foxy4ever duhh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could make shippo go as a fox, make kirara go as a another type of animal. Yura could always go as repunzal to play the hair gimic. kagura could go as a winged warrior or somthing to that affect. last but not least kanna could go as a little girl costume. for shippo's he could just leave his tail out where fur clothes things and have little ears on his head. id personally make kirara a dog like thing with a tail and big ears. i thought i'd be funny if yura went as a stutty repunzal. kagura's one of the not bad, bad guys she could be a leather clad warrior with scared and messed up wings. Kanna always looked young so she could goo in a school girl out fit, and like with the earlier thing have a lolly pop or something.
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