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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:50 CDT
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yeah!very very funny!enjoyment is how you say very humorous.anyway update the ficcy!you said that you go in your sisters closet to write down the outfits that kikyo wears. whats up with your sis?
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Reviewed By: Hiei81 On: April 16, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. MY. GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just about died laughing. this fic is so damn funny. my brother came in and looked at me funnyly(is that a word?) because i was on the floor holding my stomec(sp?). he turned to the story...read it...then just staird at the computer... about a min later he was on floor with me... he's kinda slow... after words our mom had to take us to the hospital... thay suspected laughing gas... but i calmly (ya right)told them it was just a fan fic. they understud... i think. dun dun dun.^^'
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Reviewed By: IceDrake_5150 On: April 15, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
im writing this after chapter 3. You have them wake up at 6:00pm jus so you know, but please stop putting in all the authors notes, they make the story kinda hard to read
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Title: valene
Reviewed By: valene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really cute story...keep it going i love it*_*
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 01:39 CDT
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all that lovie dovie stuff made me miss my boy friend. :( damn school work. and my roommate is gone so i even have the room to myself. man this sucks. nehoo. i liked the fic. yay Rin and Sesshy! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: heh
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 13, 2004 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolness UPDATE! really cute story i luv all the randomness!!
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Reviewed By: Orb (never online) On: April 13, 2004 15:20 CDT
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YAY!!!! UPDATE!!!! OOOOhhhh I missed this story SOOOOOOO much!!! Its super great. THe guys sleeping with the girls was to cute. ANd Inu saying "mate"? aww!!!! And racey racey Sess-chan and Rin, wow. I hope hope hope you udpate soon soon soon!!!
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Reviewed By: chelly On: March 18, 2004 01:10 CST
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lol i luv ur fanfic with ur author notez..they are juz so cute! and funnyy haha well nic storyy itz good keep up tha workk..!
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Title: Ur stiry Rocks!!!!!
Reviewed By: Latin_hanyo03 On: March 18, 2004 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing i saw wrong was the spelling mistakes.....the rest kicked ass!!!! I have to know....who does Kagome share the bed er...cabin with[Sorry but im a guy and were all a little like Muroku 0;)]Any who keep up the good work your creative as hell oh and if you steel Fluffy wont that make Rin sad :(......one more thing this story isnt turning into a lemon is it....SMACK! PUNCH! SLAP! POUND! HELL YES!!! owww...that would be from Kagome, Sango, Rin, Kiara and Kikyo(WHORE!!!) Yeah im crazy but we all are. Hope to see a new ch soon!!! Again kick ass story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Peachy_I_Am On: March 05, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME: PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE YOUR fIC IT IS BY FAR THE GREATEST IN THE WORLD AND IF YOU DONT UPDATE I THINK I MIGHT DIE OF SUSPENSE!!! ASI: well then that would be one less Kagome and Inu-Yasha freak to deal with. ME: Take that back! you just mad because Kagome and Sesshomaru will mever end up together SO GET OVER IT!!! ASI: ... ME: I WIN! GO ME! YEAH SO ANYWAY PLEASE UPDATE IM DIEING HERE!!! again i lay i love your story it is the best all praiz!
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 09:57 CST
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Oh yeah I picked 1 and 2!!! Kikyo is suck a bitch!!!
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About time so couples got together. I'm so happy Fluffy/Rin finally got a push in the right direction!!! Anyway I'm so happy you put Shippo/Kiara are together and you didn't put Kiara/Hojo!!! By the way is Hojo gonna be gay in this story, and when is Miroku/Sanog getting together!!! Please tell me!!! Email me at inumoon3@yahoo.com!!! Otherwise your story the best Inuyasha fic I've read on this site in a long time!!!! ^_^!!!
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