| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 00:48 CDT
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sorry to have taken so long in reviewing this chapter, but i just got back to school a week ago and the stress of first week classes has made me sick. (sarcastic jump for joy) nehoo. loved the chap, it was very long (a good thing). up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 16:18 CDT
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omg!! Yay~~ Its been like forever since you're updated, and forever since I've checked my updates. YAY!! I hope this means you updated "last song" too. aww Leah-chan your story is so funny! I reminds me of my friends and I. I can't wait till you can update again. please please please?
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great up-date can't wait o read more^_^
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 29, 2004 22:35 CDT
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that was GREAT!!!!!!! plz update SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ice_Goddess_101 On: August 29, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im soooooo happy u finally updated!!!!and tht chapter was really awesome!!!keep ^ the good work !
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 16:38 CDT
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I luvvvv dis stori! It's so cute and dysfunctional that it makes the whole stori funner^^ I love the councillors; they all remind me of mah friends, which is actually kinda of creepy, but that's all right. Then again I'm also mad at you for putting Sesshoumaru with Rin, but whatcha gonna do? I lov Fluffy to death, I think everyone does, even if they're not gay. ^^ Crazy Monkey Sex is cool, just as long as I don't have to see Sakura and Sy go at it. I luve that mall chappie! I've recently discovered that I'm a shopaholic, and I just loved that chappie. Poor poor Holo though, no one pays any attention to him. I think I spelled his name wrong, but I can't seem to remember it. Anyway, you put the fun in dysfunctional, [I no I took that from somewhere] I luve Saku and Sakura's characters, They're like the psychotic, drunk sisters I never had! No Bankotsu or Jakotsu? Tsk tsk tsk, they should have been councillors too, dysfunctional doesn't work without them or Kikyou! ^^ I don't think I quite believe Military would be the answer, Happy happy lala camp would be great. [Pst… They give you drugs there don't they?] Oh yeah, umm I vote all of the above, xept for 3 and 4^^ ah hell, why not just add a bald kikyou drunk, and lesbianish?
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Reviewed By: InuAngel5878 On: August 29, 2004 16:02 CDT
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OH!! BTW... about ur lil voting thingy.. i vote: Should go out w/ Naraku + Fall in the lake... and drown *coughs* oh!... now howd the that happen? hmm.. i wonder... *blank stare*
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Reviewed By: InuAngel5878 On: August 29, 2004 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ YAY!! IM SO HAPPY U FINALLY UPDATED!! It was a great chapter jus like ALL the others! Usually after so long, some writers write differently but it was the same flow as if u wrote it consistently! (i know that sounds kinda off and hard to get... ^_^0 hope ya get wut i mean...) anywayz... i love ur story and hope its longer than jus 3 more chapters... JA NE! ^_^ V
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 22:34 CDT
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LOVLEY CHAPPIE!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 28, 2004 21:09 CDT
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Excellent chapter... Glad to see Inu finally making his move (now that thr threat of Kikyo is reduced for the time being) Seems like the only one not getting anywhere is Miroku...perhaps he should try a non-perverted approach? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: kittygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 19:58 CDT
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i think u should do number 5 and iluved it i uved it i luved it
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Reviewed By: TehSexyPeach [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
#2 BUT YOU SHOULD THROW HER IN THE LAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...3 hours later...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *finally takes a breath* IM DONE!
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Reviewed By: Hatira On: August 28, 2004 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gerat job, oh, and I pick number 5 on ur vote list, anyways, hope you update soon au revior mon ami! ~*let the sun and the moon dance in the sparkles of the night...*~ ~*InuSessRoxx AKA: sesshomaru_luver on fanfiction.net*~
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 01:49 CDT
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This was really good !!! So ... whens the Inu/Kag lemon ?? lol ... Gods i love Sess hes so hot *drools* lol well update soon !!!!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 11:16 CDT
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kay, i just read this fic and i must say,this is probably the funiest fic ever!!!you should be so proud about that, i laughed so hard my mom was giving me funny looks. poor hojo, no one knows his name and he has no friends. i almost cried for him. almost. and he still cant take a hint. and that was so good how you had inuyasha call kagome mate when she woke up. and that little fluff/lime with sess and Rin, excellent!!! and i completly agree with you on those quiznos commercials. those things just look plain nasty. their teeth busting out of their mouths like that-yuck! and i also love the Gieco comercials too. me and my brother always say it when it comes on. that poor girl loves that man, but he loves jessica...oh well, keep up the good work.
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