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Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 12, 2005 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!! it's hilarious !!!! and for the qquiz thingie i vote for * 5 * lol ...update soon!! it was totally funny!! : )
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Reviewed By: dj On: March 09, 2005 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
5 this fic is great You should get hojo and kouga drunk and have a gay experience love this fic it is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: linz On: March 09, 2005 22:57 CST
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very funny, i love it, i would write more but i'm in a rush! love the story update soon!
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Reviewed By: BlueThunder13 On: March 09, 2005 22:05 CST
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omg that was really good... and on your quiz thingie i think you should do answer number 5 when kikyo ends up with naraku and then falls into a lake... that is the only thing that that bitch deserves... excuse my language... but thanks for updating and i hope update soon... and by the way... naraku should be the devil or something... or maybe a bunny rabbit... with the big suit and all...i don't know about kouga... but i hope that you can come up with something soon so you can update.... thanks for writing such a good story... and i hope you update soon... thankies bunches...bye
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Title: Kouga
Reviewed By: NordicaVB still not signed in On: March 09, 2005 21:58 CST
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Hmm, for Kouga you would have to go with something like a King or Zeus...you know, that whole 'king of the gods' act (well, he is a 'prince' you know). Can't really think of anything else for him...unless he goes as the President. OH...how about a sheep, so he's like a Wolf in Sheep's clothing. As for Naraku, he should go as a Pimp or um...I don't think I can say that here, but how about he dresses like a man that likes to dress like women. Sorry, best I could do. Hope it helps!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: March 09, 2005 19:50 CST
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YES! YOU UPDATED! I AM SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Military time
Reviewed By: NordicaVB not signed in On: March 09, 2005 19:41 CST
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Okay, someone may have mentioned this already...but since you have not fixed it...military time is based on 24 hrs. the AM begins at 0000hrs (zero hundred hour) (1200AM). eight in the morning in 0800hrs (or eight hundred hours). 1:00PM is 1300hrs (thirteen hundred hours). So 10:00PM is 2200hrs. I would suggest, if you have time, fixing this mistake because it is a little distracting.
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Reviewed By: godess On: March 09, 2005 18:12 CST
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I really love reading this fic, every time I read it I laugh so damn hard I love it, I'm going to be sad when you Finnish it though, but I still can't wait till the next update so update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 09, 2005 16:49 CST
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Excellent chapter! That was too funny for words! I think I'll vote 1. Again. I think. I have an idea for Kouga and Naraku...the front and back end of a pantomime horse. I have no idea why I have that idea but it just seems to fit for those two... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 19:30 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC! its so funny..plz update soon
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Reviewed By: ayngel_fire On: February 16, 2005 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love reading this fic, every time I read it I laugh so damn hard I love it. can't wait till the next update so update soon!!!!!
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Title: i just found you, and i love you! *not that way you homophobs!* 2!
Reviewed By: aly-oh-mally On: February 14, 2005 22:48 CST
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IT CUT ME OFF, THE FUCKER HAD THE NERVE!! hehe, my friends say im bipolar. want a tootsie rool? SANGO:hello? she needs to come as Laura Croft. FLUFFY:drag queen RIN:a naughty angel SHIPO:ROBIN!!!(BATMAN) KIRARA:catwoman. sexy hallie berrie outfit too. HOBO*ehem*HOJO:what do you think? a hobo. KIKYO:a VERY nasty lookin wanna be play boy bunny. NIRAKU:a jiggalo. GOOD LUCK! I LOVE YOUR STORY! i totaly wont be offendeed if you dont use my ideas, but i hope you consider them! and have kikyo + niraku fall in the lake when there trien to get the grove right, cuz shes too lose!!! please UPDATE!!!
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Title: i just found you, and i love you! *not that way you homophobs!*
Reviewed By: aly-oh-mally On: February 14, 2005 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU!!!! your story TOTALY kicks ass! youre my new idol! ok, sorry, kinda weird today. not to mention the fact that ive just found your story and ive fallen hard. oh well. ok, apart from youre beyond awsome story, and the beyond increadably awsome randomness! *yah!* i got some killer ideas for the costume party! INUYASHA: the night in shining *silver* armor, cuz i think he would look dead sexy!! KAGOME:i totaly want her to be in red and black, so i think she should be a vamp. cuz shes the actual inocent one, and what costume party is there without a suductive vampire? MIROKU:i think he should be that one guy who runs around in a white botton up shirt, socks, brifs, and sunglasses. >_
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Title: Costume Ideas
Reviewed By: Kawaii_Kit On: February 12, 2005 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol for costume ideas, I think Shippo should go as a Pirate, and Kirara should be his wench (lol, he should have a chain that is attached around kirara's neck;D) ummm who else... Yura should be dressed as a scantally(sp?) clad devil lady, Kagura should be dressed as Yuna from Final Fantasy X-2 (lol), Kanna should be dressed as an angel... she's always reminded me off one, regardless of the fact she is evil in the anime... (I don't hold it against her)... Kikyo should be dressed as the local whore, wait... she already is... Damn... lol, ok now that that's out of my system... Sesshy and Inu should dress in their kimono's that they wear in the anime, and that's about it... Just a suggestion! Keep up the good work!
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Title: uhh here's some costume comments
Reviewed By: foxy4ever duhh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could make shippo go as a fox, make kirara go as a another type of animal. Yura could always go as repunzal to play the hair gimic. kagura could go as a winged warrior or somthing to that affect. last but not least kanna could go as a little girl costume. for shippo's he could just leave his tail out where fur clothes things and have little ears on his head. id personally make kirara a dog like thing with a tail and big ears. i thought i'd be funny if yura went as a stutty repunzal. kagura's one of the not bad, bad guys she could be a leather clad warrior with scared and messed up wings. Kanna always looked young so she could goo in a school girl out fit, and like with the earlier thing have a lolly pop or something.
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