| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: chipmunkx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 08:42 CST
Comment/Review:
really funny, you should update faster
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Reviewed By: Dawnrider31 On: January 05, 2004 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. It's more openly funny than others I've encountered. Your sense of humor is very similar to mine which, I think, makes me enjoy the story more. Yay for making Kikyo a stripperella type figure. weee! Anyway, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 17:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep writing, Keep writing...I read too many fanfics...this is great...too many fics...I need a girlfriend...
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Title: Hey yo!!
Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW thankyou! >hug< Really great chappy! Best one so far! ^_^ I love your author's notes ^_^ adds to the story. Why am I being so NICE??!!! *looks around; scared* ITS THE LUGGAGE IMPS!!!! AHHHHHH! *Runs away, running into a possessed looking Hojo* Oh... Hi Hoho. "HOJO!!! DEATH TO THE WRITER!!!" "RUN!!!!!!" TTYL ^_^
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Reviewed By: kikyohater#1 On: January 05, 2004 08:42 CST
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*rolls around on the floor laughing* damn!!! that was funny as hell!!! the whole make up thing!!! damn!!! where the hell did that idea come from? and if that scene wasn't bad enough, the author's notes that u put in there are so damn funny!!!! and the only thing that totally suxs is THE STUPID DEAD ASSHOLE BITCH IS IN THE STORY!!!!! i cannot stand that stupid bitch!!!! (of course i am sure you figured that out by my name kikyohater#1) ugh.. i hope you make something really bad happen to her, like drowning in the lake for example, or killing herself!! that would be the greatest thing!!! ne wayz hope you update soon this story is getting good!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 20:13 CST
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hehe those girls are harsh. poor yash. i most deffenatly like the tention between kag and yash. and oh how i wish i could have been there to see him sleeping. *sigh* sess is so cute and romantic. love it. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: 2 lazt 2 sign in On: January 04, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! Some Rin/Sess fluff and Kag/Inu in the same chapter!!! 2 much 4 me 2 handle!!! LOL. Nice chapter, update as soon as u can PLZ!!!! Oh!!! I really like ur author notes!! They r funny 2!! I dont mind them.
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Title: (im not logged in cause my computers an ass...-.-)
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AYE! You must write more soon! I love it so sososososososososososos much! So get writing! NOW!!!!!!! (oh, and your AN's are really, really funny!...im such a freak...-.-;;)
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: kikyo should die On: January 03, 2004 16:08 CST
Comment/Review:
update faster
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Reviewed By: hallie On: January 03, 2004 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very creative plz update soon
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agh! I loved the "kiss" scene. If you can call it a kiss. That is so them. Fighting then bam, but acting like it never happened. Ha. Wonderful. I gave you a 5 on spelling ^_^ Hell, I give ME a 5 on spelling ^_^ Power to the illiterates!! You're so goofy. You totally got my name wrong *laughs ass off* Shit, see what you made me do??? *haha* Email me.
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Reviewed By: I love fluffy On: January 02, 2004 14:30 CST
Comment/Review:
good
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
suprize kisses are half the fun. becides i thought it fit in perfectly there. oh and i give you a medle for that sess in the shower bit. um. yum! up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: katz21 On: January 01, 2004 16:04 CST
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! oh, and by the way, great fic...... a few spelling errors, but hey, we're not all perfect right? eh.....i guess i can stop talking now......er.... typing lol.....anywaz.... yeah. update!!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 31, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just update faster and i'll give a straight row of tens!
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