| "Strength of Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Reviewed By: dudekiller On: July 04, 2005 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, please update quickly
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update again soon. Can't wait to see how they work out the problems and what Naraku tries to do to Kagome and Inuyasha.
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Title: Completely Absorbed....
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl On: June 13, 2005 11:58 EDT
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At first i wasn't sure i liked the sort of slow pace things were going. It was like there was almost too much detail. But as i continued to read my appreciation for your writing grew until i was completely absorbed in it. Your attention to detail is amazing. I love the japanese terms that give this story that flair of authenticity. I love how you gave inu & kag a real beginning, completely detailed & new, yet still adding many parts of their story that we are already familiar with. I admire your writing style, and the way your *lemons* are so emotional/spiritual yet still sexy & mildly perverse (let's be honest here, who doesn't love lemons???). I *impatiently* wait for your next update. As an avid reader in general, Thank you for taking the time to share this with the world.
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Reviewed By: Shie On: June 11, 2005 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
'That night she held a smiler dream to the last' instead of 'smiler', similar?
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Reviewed By: Shie On: June 11, 2005 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting! But, just a note, 'Of course, vampires are not real and they really have no baring on this story.' instead of 'baring' I think you mean 'bearing'.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: May 19, 2005 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I have to tell you that your story is absolutely wonderful and addicting! I don't think I've read anything quite like it, so I give you bonus points for the originality! :) I love how you are able to envolve the lemons/fluff without overdoing it like some other authors do. Everything flows just right and your writing is just beautiful! :) Thank you for writing this, really, truley, I am very touched and in love with this wonderful piece of work! Great job! I know you will be busy so just update when you can, whenever that may be, because I'd wait forever for an update. That's how much I love this story! ^_^ Take care and have a nice day! -Crys
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Reviewed By: SesshomarusNekoHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story! Definitely one to make you laugh as you read it and yet feel the seriousness of the moments as well. Good job and keep up the good work! Can't wait to see how it all ends!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: May 15, 2005 21:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the chapter =D
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 21:09 EDT
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Um, I'm confused as to why InuYasha was put on probation? What did he do wrong or was it simply the entire Shikon No Tama thing? I know that Miroku and Sango said that he had been relieved of his duties, but no other reasons were told. Just wondering...
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Title: Gamu yo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
battles, and fluffy little tails...I love this chapter, and I'm looking forward to some more. I wonder if the next one will be a tear puller
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: May 12, 2005 23:23 EDT
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It certainly has been a while since I last read this story, so it took a bit of work to catch up. But I'm glad I did! Very enjoyable and I love how the story is progressing so far. Keep it up and update whenever you find the chance, ok? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: May 12, 2005 21:05 EDT
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wow wow wow great story. just found it, which makes me sad you won't update for a while, but worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: May 12, 2005 13:28 EDT
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Since you want to be so correct in translations, I have a couple corrections for you. Sankon Tetsusou- (Sahn-con the-sue-soh) tetsuo is a hard "tet" sound, not a soft "th" sound. And urasai is actually spelled urusai, the "u" sound is more like a "oo" sound like in "you," but without the "y" Anyway, I really like this fic but it feels like it has slowed down a lot since the beginning and like the plot is being forgotten in details. I hope you get a chance to work on it this summer, then you can post a ton of chapters all at once! =)
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Reviewed By: pooky mon On: April 27, 2005 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the story is really great. It's sort of like i'm watching the show right as i read this. You are very descriptive and catch themood of the story well.GOOD LUCK with the rest of the story can't wait till your next update.
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Lately, you have been updating sooner than usual, and I really love that. Please update soon...please?
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