| "Strength of Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: April 20, 2005 19:39 EDT
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update! update! update! i love your story and really want to read more!
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Title: UPDATE! I have no life so I depend on fanfiction... I know...so sad
Reviewed By: lil ol' Ina On: April 18, 2005 19:53 EDT
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Ya know Im a camper but in no way am I a happy one. I have yet to read a single new chapter and I am dieing to read the new installment in this fine ass story... so get to the writing and help me out here. I realy am getting a little tired of having to BEG u to update. I mean my hands cramping up here from typing. lol. Really though I really congratulate u on a job well done. I mean I pride myself for being a pretty good writer but my best work would be put to shame next to urs. So umm... UPDATES? Anytime.. ANYTIME SOON? I hope its soon. Well... see ya later pookie. Adios!
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Title: OH NO!!!!!
Reviewed By: U Rock! On: April 11, 2005 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD U JUST DROP US LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I DONT KNOW IF U NOTICED BUT UR KILLING ME HERE!!!!! THIS IS INJUSTICE! WHERES THE HUMANITY?!?!?!?!?!? I FEEL SO ALONE.... lol just update already.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: April 09, 2005 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=D
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Reviewed By: CeruleanStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey~ I really love your stroy. It's original and sweet and you do a great job with characterization without making it boring. Your story is one of my absolute favoites. I do have a request regarding the definitions though. I really like how you give the definitions so that we know what we're reading. However, I was wondering if it would be possible for you to just put he definition in parenthesis right after you use the Japnase word. That way we would have the definition and still knwo where the word appeared because I know that I perosnally don't usually remember where the word showed up in the first place, so I have a hard time remebering why the word was important. Please update again soon! I really want to see what happens to our pavorite couple. By the way, was the voice Kagome vaguely remembered Kikyo? Keep up the good work and please don't make us wait too long. ~CS
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Title: YEA YO! #100!
Reviewed By: lil ol' Ina On: April 04, 2005 22:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As ur 100th reviewer I have the obligation to let u know that because u dont not update as often as ur faithful and loyal readers would like, I am here to inform u that u slightly suck. The only thing saving u from sucking completely is the fact that we need u for updates and we need some soon! lol jk Really though ur good. Now Im only telling you these compliments so that after you can update already! Im dieing here!
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Reviewed By: tduke1999 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a fabulous story!! i love the originality of the plot and the way you've developed the characters to remain in character with the series, but still fit in to the different environment. very well done. my only comment is that the use of the japanese words is distracting. i don't speak japanese and i know only a few words so when you throw a word in that i don't know, it breaks the mood b/c i have to scroll down to the bottom of the story and find the definition and then head back up to where i was and finish reading. kinda messes up the mood you've created. other than that this story is perfect!! thank you for sharing your talent!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: April 02, 2005 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: JustAReader On: April 02, 2005 18:09 EST
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awww..even in his human form
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely keep up the great work
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Title: U-Rock!
Reviewed By: Dchan3 On: March 31, 2005 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was skeptical at first about reading this story but, I gave it a shot and was plesently surprised! This is very well written and I enjoyed it very much. I hope you'll update as soon as you can.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! At the beggining there was such lemony goodness!!! All of it was wonderful! And the meetong was described wonderfully! You really thought this through! I laughed at a few pars also, and thatnk you so much for putting a litle "japanese dictionary" in the chapters! I would've gotten just a little bit lost if you didn't. The whole deal with the school is really great! I started cracking up whenever Inu brought Kagome lunch! And that Keade got on to them (mainly Inuyasha) later on about taking away to much energy before classes and keeping their activities for another time of the day! LOL! I can't wait to see (or read) how much stronger their bond is going to become! UPDATE SOON! p.s. I love your other fic Suvival of the Pack
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Reviewed By: JustAReader On: March 26, 2005 15:18 EST
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aww, such fluff :)
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 01:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm realing enjoying this story I wish I had you as a pen pal that way I can brush up on on my japanese :-)
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Title: Strength of Bond
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 12:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I just love this fic, and I really loved this chapter. It was a nice change to see the two of them enjoying some normal (under the circumstances) life type time. Its hard to regain your equalibrium when life keeps knocking you off your feet with one bizarre circumstance after another. Anyway, I like it, I love it, I want some more of it. It was great to see your voice again.
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