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| "Par Tout Autre Nom" Reviews/Comments [ 734 ] | | Pages (49): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] | Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 25, 2004 07:29 PDT
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.... who's the dog? Could it be Sessho..... well I guess I have to find out....
| Title: WHAT!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 00:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for saying my name. Shock apon shock, Miroku did he posess his decendent, well he is a god, I'm sure there are lots of ways for a god to make and appearence in the mortal world. And is that Sesshy and Hiei fighting...Just what in the many worlds is going on. Once more you've left me hungery for more. I need a fix soon, I hope work allows for time to write.
| Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 24, 2004 23:42 PDT
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Great chapter. So Miroku is back well he is a god so it isn't that hard to imagine. So are they going to make up for old times? Can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the excellente work.
| Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: June 24, 2004 20:52 PDT
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Okay, totally pissed off about the whole 1500 characters limit thing, so I wanna write all the stuff I didn't get to write.--- I'm confused about Miroku. I know he died, and Shinju looks like him, but why does Kagome see him? Like, is this a dream/Illusion/Hallucination?Is Miroku actually there? You're such a meanie head for keeping all this from us for so long!!! Grr...---- About that big white dog. If Sess is sleeping at home, why is he about to make a Hiei-slushie? Rather, how will he make a Hiei slushie? Did he leave a fake aura or something for Kagome to find? Or is the big white dog someone else completely? Now I know Kurama's gonna come to the rescue and all, but does Hiei want him to?... Just a thought.--- Ah! Time for my Daily Revolution! (was it revolution? Inspiration?... Oh whatever) Well, let's see.The key to keeping a reader going and interested is by not telling them everything all at once. Kinda like what you're doing with your story... hey! No fair! Stop stealing my innovations! (i dont even know what that word means) They're mine, ya hear? ALL MINE!!! *hugs innovations* ---- *sigh* it feels good to be caught up with my reviews. And I'm leaving two! You must feel so loved... and the need to glomp me, because you know I deserve it. Oh, by the way, thanks for mentioning me again! I felt all fuzzy and warm in inside... Sorta like when I drink hydrochloric acid... hmmm. The pen is mightier than the sword, and a hell of a lot easier to write with
| Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: June 24, 2004 20:38 PDT
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holy holy holy holy!!! This is what went through my mind when I read the last sentence of this latest chapter. Holy shit, someone is going to die.--- Dude, how have you not gotten it yet? You have to wait a minimum of 5 days before you update again, otherwise I get horribly behind in my reviews and then I'll have even more to write! When I saw the notice for this chapter, I was like, Dude, already??? Aww, man! Man, the things I do for great authors. Sheesh.---- Woo, stikky-outty part for chapter... ummm, thirty-something. What I remember most was the fact that Hiei was wearing a black kimono. It reminded me of Inuyasha and how he loved his fire-rat thingy and folded his arms in it too. Hey, I wonder what would happen if Hiei and Inuyasha met? Arrogance meets the grinch. Hee hee. Okay, what else about this chapter? I think i know why Shippou was acting all 'Aww, no fair!' When he realized Hiei had been absorbed. I think that being absorbed is like an honor or something. And all the family members have been absorbed, and thats why no one can feel their auras! Just like when that happened to Hiei! See, sometimes your reviewrs are smart!!!----- Stikky outty part for latest chapter: DEFINITELY last sentence... Well, actually its a tie between that and the whole Miroku thing. What's up with that? Isn't Miroku dead or something? Ooh, I'm confused. My head is spinning with possibilities. @_@--- Would write more, but have no more space left. Have a nice day! (stupid MM a | Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: June 24, 2004 18:54 PDT
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WHAT THE HELL
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 18:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enter Inuyasha? Please don't keep us in suspense!
| Title: WOW! So FAST! And another cliffy. . . *Sigh*
Reviewed By: silver neko (won't let me stay logged in :S) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 18:33 PDT
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I got mentioned! Again! I could die of happiness! But enough about that. I only have so many characters left to write this with! Okay. My favorite line outta the new (so fast!) chapter was "Where would Hiei go after consuming enough sugar to kill a small human?" At least I think it was that. Anyway. Next thing I liked about this chapter. I don't know if it was intended or if anyone noticed if it was, but doesn't it seem like Youko and Kurama are really blending more and more and you can really see it? What will happen with Miroku and Kagome? Jump to the end of the chapter here, why would Sesshomaru attack Hiei, especially after promising the answers and the not harming? Was he in the Western Lands or something? Was it not Sesshomaru? But then-- would it be Inuyasha? Was one of his wishes to be a true demon? Makes sense. I want to know the real answers! Write more! Soon! Hey! End of review character count is only 392! I feel so proud. . . and yet oddly annoyed at Mediaminer for putting that characters left thing in. Ja ne! I'm still so happy about the mentioning! Really, though, Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: kiwarrier [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 17:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent chapter, but mean to leave a cliffie at the end. can't wait for the next update!
| Reviewed By: kawaii_otaku On: June 24, 2004 17:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*huge eyes* This is like the best Fanfic ever! That's a really lame compliment but I can't come up with anything better, 'cause at the moment my brain won't process anything but the word WOW! Keep it up! *gives protection ward against rabid fanfic readers* I think you'll need it... O.o
| Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 14:04 PDT
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and the suspense grows even more. ok, you must update soon, this chapter literally put me on the edge of my seat. I must read more.
| Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 22, 2004 20:44 PDT
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Welcome back. Love the story and the chapter. Keep up the good work.
| Title: Finally! I've been waiting too long! Now. More answers!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want more! O.o What's with the new counter things? *Just noticed.* Is it because of the spamming people? *Blinks* I guess I'm a bit behind the times, huh? Anyway, another great chapter! I can't believe Hiei just isn't seeing the differences. But then again, it sorta makes sense. I can't believe you left us with that cliffy for a whole week! But I guess life tends to cut into story-writing time some, doesn't it? I'm soo glad I don't have a life sometimes! (Is that really a good thing?) And I'm kinda glad I don't use html tags much; they cut into the characters left meter, too. Oh! Q&A thing! My question that I have to have answered! WHERE IS INUYASHA?! I mean, shouldn't he know about Kagome being in the future? And Kagome can't have had to absorb him in the past, because isn't he the one that made the wish? How can he make the wish and still be absorbed? And besides that, how could he hover and stuff when Kagome was, as Shippou put it, "round," if he was absorbed? Anyway, before the characters left meter detatches itself from my monitor and beats me within an inch of my life, I'd better cut this off, huh? *Glares at the meter.* Actually, amazingly enough, I managed to hit exactly ZERO characters left on this long, rant-like review. I wanted to see how long the longest review possible was, and I achieved my goal!! I just realized how infuriating this fanfic must be to the people who only watch YYH. . . They don't know any of the answers! Poor YYH-only watchers. Ja | Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 22, 2004 12:56 PDT
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talk about emotional change, except for Hiei that's rare.... glad to see you update again.
| Title: he he
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he's part of the family, so does that mean that he gets to find out whats really going on frist. I just hope we find out soon, or not soon. I still love long stories. Once more I wasn't notified by MM.org about your last update, but I don't think I have to worry about forgetting that I was reading this now. See ya next chapter.
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