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| "Par Tout Autre Nom" Reviews/Comments [ 734 ] | | Pages (49): [ « ‹ 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 › » ] | Reviewed By: fallenangel666 (not log in) On: June 08, 2004 06:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bows to almighy authoress i shal bild a shrine to honner your greatness ((starts bilding shine)) p.s. plz 4give mispellings thx
| Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 16:25 PDT
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Do you know how much I love your fic...? Do you know how much pain you will be infor if you don't update soon and end that cliffy...? Let me answer: ALOT!!!!!!!!! I shall send my Chibi army after you! They will torment you by having Kaurama a foot away from you and not letting you touch him or write about him or talk to him! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But seriously... UPDATE!!!! I love Youko! I love you! I love this Fanfic! *worships at the shrine she made in your/this fic's honor* (And I'm glad my reviews make you laugh... I really do appreciate your work! ^_~ You're a brillient writing genious I swear!!!!!!!)
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 04:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it to me again ... made me think about the characters when I wasn't online. This morning I was lying awake at 4AM in my motel room and I started to wonder if Kagome would be reunited, if only briefly, with Sango and Miroku. Then I started to wonder if somewhere in that ginormous contract that Enma and Koenma didn't read was some fine print holding a deity spot for Kagome when she eventually shuffled off the mortal coil. So, the upshot of all this wondering was to go down to the motel computer room and see if by some miracle you had updated again. No such luck. Oh, well.
| Reviewed By: Michi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 17:51 PDT
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Grr Mediaminer doesn't like me and wont let me sign in. But my point is... I can't believe that you stopped there!!! Now I'm gonna be all paranoid waiting for the next chappy!!!!!!!! Ack. Update soon!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Sanura (not logged in) On: June 06, 2004 09:30 PDT
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.......aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! You had to end it right there, I have to say, perfect cliffy, *sniff* and I hate you for it. Oh, please update soon, the suspense is killing me. I must read more of the story.
| Title: Finally, the fight!
Reviewed By: momiji_mouse On: June 05, 2004 22:53 PDT
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Oh wow... we finally get to the fight scene and Kurama and Hiei see the power Kagome has and... whimper -- you leave it there! Evil cliffy!! Is she alive, dead or hurt??? And what will Kurama do? Loved the fluff in the last chapter, and all the new developments (courtesy of Miroku!) in this one! Please, please P-L-E-A-S-E update soon!!
| Reviewed By: Irrilayth On: June 05, 2004 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this just keeps getting better and better! I love it. Keep up the good work pretty please with sugar or whatever else you want on top.
| Title: Upsest
Reviewed By: CrazyforFanfic On: June 05, 2004 16:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story. i think that i have become obsessed...*coughs* i mean fixated. i check every day to see if you have updated, and when i see that you do i get off of my but and to the happy dance! i can't wait to see what happens next. i just loved the part when kurama and hiei got to see how kagome can kick butt! Where did you learn to write so incredibly? I don't want your story to ever end. and make sure you never shorten your stories. Your writing skills are mind-boggling! I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!!
| Title: No more time limit. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 15:25 PDT
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I absolutely love this fic! And now that I'm not on some time constraints and read the chapter thoroughly, I can probably make a slightly longer, slightly better review. Heh. Right. Soooo. . . I really like the plant! Still! I was afraid that you'd completely forgotten the plant. What else is there. . . I love how descriptive you are, too, and your fight scenes! The only problem. . . the japanese words! Can you loan me a dictionary or something? Please? I don't mind them in the fic. I'm pretty good at logic, and hence I can figure out what they mean. . . But they confuse me. That's about it. Just ignore me; everyone ese does. *Shrug* Even if I am leaving longer reviews here than any other fanfic. . .
| Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 14:15 PDT
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0.0 oro? Sorry, reading Kenshin ^_^. Anyway, it seems to be getting to a very dramatic point now.
| Title: O MY GOD!
Reviewed By: KitsuneLove On: June 05, 2004 13:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story. You are such a great writer and I love how you can really bring out the characters personalities. I really appreciate you updating so soon. Keep up the fantasitic work! I JUST LOVE LOOVVEE LOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE!!!!!! your story!!!!
| Reviewed By: rosie13 (..why do I bother?) On: June 05, 2004 13:02 PDT
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Aiichii! You just can't slow down, can you??? You do realize it takes at least an hour to write one of these things? And since I didn't get to writing one last chapter, its gonna take even longer! I even save my progress on a word document, just in case my computer freezes. (It's happened once before-- not a very nice experience) And that takes time AND patience. Patience very much so, seeing as I'm stuck in this big black leather chair for another hour. So just be grateful, cause you're the only author I do this for. Fell special. Now.----- Okay, the stiky-outy part for the chapter before last. I believe the licking of the hand was most memorable. Something about Kurama sucking on her fingers made it stick out in my mind. And also when Youko maneuvered Kurama's hands to pull Kagome onto their lap while they were kissing. That too. Hum. You're very good at writing those scenes, I've noticed, and made them very memorable. (as you may tell) Some authors have a thing for romance, some for action scenes (ack, not me at all! If I try writing an action scene, it turns out sounding like retarded dance steps... Okay that wasn't a very good comparison, but you get my point), and some for humor. I try incorporating all three into my pieces, but sometimes they don't turn out exactly as I want them to. Like, you know how sometimes this stupendously wonderful idea pops into your head, and then when you try to write it, it sounds like crap?... If that has ever happened to you, then welcome to my world. That's why all us devoted readers stick by your side. You can write out all those great ideas without warping them into something completely different... Hum. maybe if I give you some of my ideas you'll write em? I like to have my fantasies done justice... But then again if I gave you a commission for writing, this story would be slowed down. (Not that it could do for some of that) Eh, maybe I'll just take a couple writing classes and try to come halfway to your talent. *shrugs* Hey, It could happen!!! ~~~~ Yay! Onto this recent chapter! It was good...Yes, good. The most sticky-outy part was when Kagome said, "Shikabane Mai.".... Stop looking at me like that! I have no idea why i remember that part!! It might have to do with the fact that I have no idea what it means.... Oh yeah, that reminds me. A suggestion- Use words that we know. I was confused more than once during this chapter for the numerous japanese word references. I'm not saying to stop using those words, but maybe you could have a translation thingy at the top of the page or something, for all us lazy-butts who don't feel like learning the japanese language. You know, so there isn't alot of confusion of sorts.--- I believe that the next memorable part was when Kurama coughed out the blood. I can just see dark-red blood splattering out of his mouth into his hand... I believe that my sister's sadistic nature is rubbing off on me. But my teacher is more sadistic!! You know what she does? Well she and her husband like to give their cat treats. So what they do is they throw the treats under their couch and watch their cat run into the couch trying to get them. The poor cat hits his head!! Sadism at its worst, it seems.---- Daily epiphany:: Paradoxes are annoying. Plain and simple. It makes time travel seem unbelievably out of our grasp. Poor scientists with their far-fetched dreams of time travel. *sigh* But you know what's more annoying? Scientists who try to work around paradoxes using word tricks. Like explaining something will help you achieve time travel. And if time travel was true, then don't you think some of the world's tragedies would hav been prevented? Or maybe they have been, but we'll never know it... Okay, I'll stop philosophizing on you! I know when I'm boring you...----- Well, another incredibly long review! All for your greedy little eyes. Just for this, you better dedicate the next entire chapter just to me. Cause, you know, I deserve it. Why do simple questions go unanswered, simple wants go unfulfilled, simple problems have complicated answers?
| Title: GAH!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (lazy) On: June 05, 2004 11:15 PDT
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No! Evil cliffy! Write more! Immediately! *So much for reviewing better, hn?*
| Reviewed By: jamee On: June 05, 2004 11:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AGGGG!! how could you!! *sniffs*
| Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 05, 2004 10:12 PDT
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DAMN!!! Wow... Uh shimatta. That was awesome. sounds like this in the final quater of the game. LOVE the story. Keep up the excellent work.
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