| "Starting Over" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: May 18, 2004 23:23 CDT
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even though i still love your fic ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: May 18, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..................................i cant believe it. u leave us hanging for weeks, and u get hooked on this new show that ive heard about but not been able 2 find, and now u wont b writing as much as u promised u would. im dissapointed.i have nothing more 2 say 2 u. when u update, then i'll CONSIDER talking 2 u again. umtil then, say bye 2 a great loyal fan of fanfiction. ja ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven On: May 13, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok can i please be an OC, but not on a fighting team, just a Female Shadow Kitsune, named Kitto(Kit), dragged to the dark tournoment along with her twin sister(Neko, by their family and she falls in love with Souta and vicea versa. any way Markings. Fur-Kitto(black w/blood red tipps at ears,tail and hair)Neko(black w/vibrent blue tipps at the same places as Kitto) Eyes-Silver(kitto)Rubie(Neko) Attacks/special abilities-perfict stealth in shadows,Fire, illusions(kitto)Perfict sealth in shadows,illusions,lightning(neko) Kitto's personality- punk that strives for perfiction, loves to sing, under a bitchy surface is an unsucure sweet 14 year old, faverate band is Evenesance, loial to all of her friends. Neko's personality-an allof prepy 14 year old whoms a bitch to the core, basicly the exact opptsite of her twin except when it comes to grades, a cats personality, always gets the attention( guess who made Kitto so innsucure), self sentered, favrate band-lillix. Kitto's faverate outfit- a tight black half top with a message saying "once upon a time i hit a boy" in red, one wrist adornned with red and black fuck bracelets, the other a wrist band with a flame on it, a black pleather mini-skirt, fishnet stockings, and knee high black leather boots, hair that is usually hanging at her mid back up in a pony tail, her ears on top of her head pearsred 5 times, red and black belly button ring, black choker/coller with red spikes no makeup. Neko's outfit- tight blue jeans, baby blue tube top, no pearsings, whight stelleto high hells...err heels, hair to mid back, way too mutch makeup. Kitto's prized possion- an orphened white female fox(the animal not youkai) named Knu(silk). Neko's prized possotion-looks. Hobbies-has a band called the Shikon Kitsunes( four soul foxes)(Kitto), shopping(Neko) Kitto's weapons- sais(think electra fron daredevel) Nekos weapons-none ok thats all BTW- keykeo is sitll alive and stole hiei's soul and the gang find a way to get their kagome back right. l8r
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Reviewed By: Rhexi-san(not signed in) On: May 05, 2004 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O im such an idiot...i've been readin dat fic for sometime now, n ddnt even realize it wuz u until i read ur latest comment on my Jewels story... ack!!! *thumps head* im such an imbecile!!!! anyhow, i really lyk ur story. (reali, reali) sry for not ever commenting--im as lazy as a person culd b so... nehoozles, update soon, ne?
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:59 CDT
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ok well it's suppose to say it's been a while jackie... it wouldn't work afetr that.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:53 CDT
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while
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:53 CDT
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jackie
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:53 CDT
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Please
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:52 CDT
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update
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Title: DUDE!
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:52 CDT
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Ok
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 05:56 CDT
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Title: Great chapters
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not fair to have Kagome lose the one she loves or the rest of her family. Udpate soon. Awesome story.
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 15:58 CDT
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Reviewed By: lil miss crazy On: April 17, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo! no no no!!! plz tell me ur gonna have a happy ending!!! plz!!! an plz hurry an continue!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 02:05 CDT
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