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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the mens outfits and it would be even better with stripper outfits and please make lots of inu/ka lemons
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Title: great idea for guys outfits
Reviewed By: Moonbay On: April 20, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed that you still had a few days left for the guys (sesshy, Inu, and miroku) to be dressed up. So I have a great idea. There is a character from excel saga named Key who wears leather straps across his chest as a shirt, its almost s&m like, and backless pants. Its a great outfit, I'm sure you could find a picture of him on google or something and so I decided to give you the idea and see if you liked it. Personally, I'd LOVE to see sesshy dressed like that. I mean Damn!!! (I'm a big Sesshy freak) Besides that I really like your fic! Your doing a great job. Good luck with the rest, and I have one more thin. I want inu and kagome to have sex already!!! I'm dying from the wait!!! LoL ja ne
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 15:18 CDT
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Aww Hime-chan this was a great chapter. Inuyasha is such a sweetheart sometimes....*cries hysterically anime style* I want a boyfriend like that!!!! An Inu/Kag lemon would be great if it fits in your plans so far. IF now, who cares?! The story rules!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 17:51 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: April 19, 2004 14:54 CDT
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need....LEMON! *blarg* update soon soon
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: April 19, 2004 11:11 CDT
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Awww! Kawaii! They're just like a family. I thought how they went to sleep was just perfect. There so cute. ^_^ I love this story, it's so amusing and beautiful. I can't wait for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 10:29 CDT
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Ya know I do love this story but I have to tell you. It's very choppy, it has all the details but they don't flow together. 'He carried her in. He shut the door. He put her in the bed.' It doesn't flow like it should it makes me feel like I'm reading a list of events or something. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, it's just how I feel.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 03:19 CDT
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you know i should spam you with a million reviews, each of them only saying one or two words just for shits and giggles. Would you appreciate that? lol i know i would! LOL well keep up the good work and please update asap. Krystal. *SPAM** hey, what do you call chickened spam??? SPICKEN!!! LOL I CRACK MYSELF UP!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 23:49 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm so excited you got another one out so soon! ^^ Getting to be one of my favorites. By the way, some of your sentences sound a bit... weird. It seems you're missing transitions because some sentences just don't seem to flow. It feels like 'Kagome went to the store. Kagome picked up milk. Kagome bought cookies, too. Kagome walked out of the store after buying the food. Kagome went to her car.' And stuff like that. Good luck and I hope you update soon! :)
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: redhead_275 On: April 18, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story so would you please update soon i bet lots of people would love the next chapter well i would anyways so ya love the story
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 19:22 CDT
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LOVE IT! ALWAYS! update soon!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 17, 2004 13:00 CDT
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i just realized something in your story...those bets i had to do something like that once anyway please update
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 17, 2004 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have also read this on f.net so since im here ill read it here i hope you update this real soon
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 17, 2004 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have also read this on f.net so since im here ill read it here i hope you update this real soon
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: April 17, 2004 12:32 CDT
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This whole bet thing is fun! Lol, fireman outfits! I love it! Anywayz, update soon!
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