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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 23:22 CDT
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YYYYAAAYYY!!!!!!!!!! lemony goodness!!!!! Your background is so cool, I wish I had other cultures in my bloodline. I think it would be cool to be like half Egyptain!!!! But anyway update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 28, 2004 21:25 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Hope all goes well. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 01:05 CDT
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Wow, chapter came out well over a few days and I'm just reading it. I'm such an ungrateful reader XD Yay for lemons... I should have read it when it arrived in my inbox ;.; Anyway, good chapters (x.x!!) and stuff o_O
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 22, 2004 20:46 CDT
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No worries, excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: May 22, 2004 01:01 CDT
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Yay, a new chappie. I still stick by my word that they could really use some sort of security. The guys are going to get into trouble if they beat up the costumers that piss them off. As for Kaede of the day care center and the uniform maker being one in the same, that's really funny. Anywhoz, see you at the next update! ^_^
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Title: Me!
Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great=)Plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: May 21, 2004 18:11 CDT
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I love this story. It's become one of my favorites since I started reading it. I hope you have Kagome quite the bar & work at the daycare center instead. I'm also interested to see what would happen if Inu met Kagome's family.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! ~*~Sunshine~*~
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: May 21, 2004 14:57 CDT
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teehee...hobo....MORE!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 14:50 CDT
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i liked this chapter. it didnt seem rushed at all so dont sweat it. the Hoho thing was a good idea, poor Kagome, she' s really getting pushed around by everyone. And Kaede making naughty clothing? lol Who'da thunk it? Can't wait to sunday.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: May 21, 2004 14:36 CDT
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Hojo's gotta go find someone else, seriously! Anywayz, great chapter, but plz don't make Kagome quit her job, I like it when she goes to work there! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(still not signed on) On: May 21, 2004 07:59 CDT
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I think Kagome and her grandfather need to have a serious talk. And why is Inuyasha acting this way all of a sudden? Is it because things are finally getting serious between him and Kagome??? And I think they should really do something about Kouga, how do you just let a guy nearly rape you then not try to call the cops??? Update soon and clear some of the drama!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 03:02 CDT
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that's good, stupid hojo never gives up huh? well he can't win so HA!!! lol jk well keep up the great work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 02:13 CDT
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hey nice chapter can't wait for the rest..I hope kagome keeps working at her job.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 01:22 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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