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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 23:35 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 18, 2004 23:02 CDT
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Inu-chan this was a great chapter, not only were there3, count 'em, 3 lemons! Theyre was still character development and stuff, thats so impressive. have fun at you moms (?) ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: June 18, 2004 22:12 CDT
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Aww, they're all so cute! Lol. I love this story. And HOORAY for the 50th chapter! Glad to hear you're better and finally out of school. ^_^ Oh, and I totally love Muse. They're so good. :nod-nod: I've got a question though, do they smoke at the club? Cause if they do, wouldn't Rin inhale the smoke and wouldn't it affect the baby? :worried: Protect the baby!! ^^; Please write more soon and have fun at your mom's!
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 21:35 CDT
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I like the three lemons you put in this chapter.I want more chapters because I like this story.please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO YUMMY
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 18, 2004 15:45 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Glad to hear you feel better, enjoy your break! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Taka TK On: June 18, 2004 14:13 CDT
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oo a chapter with little plot and a hell of a lot of smutty goodness...you should do that more often!! I loved it!
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Title: Sugoi!
Reviewed By: baka_juju2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! This is an awesome story and I can't wait to read more. I hope you have fun on your break. My favorite color is black also. Muse is an awesome band. Have you ever heard of Story Of The Year or Roony? They have some great music also. You need to listen to Roony's "I'm Shakin'" You can listen to it in Yahoo's Launch Videos. Anyway, keep up the good work. ~_~
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: June 18, 2004 12:41 CDT
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that was GREAT and SOOOO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!! plz update Soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: June 18, 2004 11:08 CDT
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neat! three lemons! woohoo! that was super neat! *neat is my new word* well update soon!
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Reviewed By: inu-story On: June 18, 2004 10:34 CDT
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i love it!!!! i cant belive Sesshoumaru is going to be a dad.i must say that i love this fic so much! its so wonderful. ^_^ one of my fac!!!! anyway PLZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATES SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: June 18, 2004 10:32 CDT
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Yay! Lemons! Three of 'em! Damn, InuYasha NEVER gets tired, does he? And I'm so happy about the baby! I luv babies...*starry eyed*. Okay, getting off topic there...-_-''. Anywayz, great chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!! now if only my fics could b this good!!! but i have a feeling that is not happening any time soon!! o well!! update soon!!! much love never forget the love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 11:05 CDT
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loved it can not wait for the next update!!! much love never forget the love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 20:56 CDT
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omg!!!!!!!! p[oor rin!!! i myself was on the verge of tears! T_T great chapters though. and keep it up with miroku and sango ^_^ theyre so cute :D
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