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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 21:15 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 19:40 CDT
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LoL, they are DEFINITELY wrapped around the girls' fingers! But, I think Fluffy was being waaaaaaay too emotional, especially for him. I mean, I can maybe understand him proposing in front of everyone else, but he probably wouldn't have kissed her, and he DEFINITELY wouldn't have explained himself about it all afterwards. Oh well, your story, not mine, and I suppose it makes it all better. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 18, 2004 18:22 CDT
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Don't worry about it, nothing you could do about your computer breaking. Excellent chapter! Like the way this is progressing. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Doujo (not logged in) On: July 18, 2004 18:04 CDT
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Hell-o! Your new chappie is good, like the others lol. Continue your work! I know I'm certainly not the first one to ask that, but do you know when it'll finish? Not that I'm hasty to finish the story, but it could take forever! (It'll be great!) anyway, update as soon as you can! :~*~: Doujo :~*~:
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Reviewed By: inuangel82{not logged in} On: July 18, 2004 15:50 CDT
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wow! i think i read that in record tym!well great chappy gatta go!
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Reviewed By: lilkawaiigurl88 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 14:07 CDT
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Yaayyy!!!!!! Rin and Sesshy got engaged! Ha Miroku was funnie in this chappie! THis story is awesome please update cause I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! Byez!
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 12:47 CDT
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omg that's so sweet! yay Sess and Rin are engaged!! ^_^ haha men are always good for carrying things when you go shopping haha great update!!! I love this story so damn much!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kori-chan On: July 18, 2004 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, did you write this all night or gt up really early...cuz i'c been up since yesterday on sheer will power to organize my favorites and hunt down the stories that i 'MYSTERIOUSLY' cant get into and have now developed a consuming hatred for the frase "story not found'?...*mutters*...hurmf mumble stupid grumbly jackasses murfhbrumb *@#^!%$ #$*&%)# #&(^*%%$^�^&(*&*^$#%#%*^&^*&^)(^&*%^$%#&*)&a mp;)&^...FEH! ...anyway love your storie *spelled wrong for cuteness effect* I never liked AU's (alternate universe fic's) UNTIL i read your's...it was AWSOME (a word that is,as my friends would say"so five minuts ago"...any way Im running out of characters so i'll make ths as short as possible...too late ,but anyway what my origanal message was and is ...is........UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DANM ONLY 6,7,5 no 6,7,2 no 6,6,7 no 6,6,...DANM IT this is POINTLESS...Oi did you know that they count spaces as characters...that show must be realy boring!Heh heh ehh...not funny huh?Oh well i tried...i realy did...which makes it even more pithetic than before...i spelled pithetic wrong did'n i ...oops...well i must be going but fell free to email me at inu_gone_bad_911@spymac.com (cool e-mail huh?)even though you won't because i am a generaly strange person...but please i'm a fresh writer with talent*or at least i think so*,devotion*none*,and the heart to WRITE...*not*...but yet i can not seem to start...or in this case finnish since i have 45 no |
Reviewed By: Hottewitabody328 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really good!! Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: July 04, 2004 20:02 CDT
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Well, I don't have allergies, so I can't really relate to the experience, but I hope they get better! And sleep is good, very good, you can never get enough of it! Anywayz, great chapter, update soon!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: RockysideofMT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great writer! I love this story! A lOT! Please update ASAP, I'm glad you had a good vacation, I'm going to San Francisco soon and I'm staying there for 2 weeks, but I hope I get to read your story well I'm away, I don't know how but I'll try! thanks again and HAPPY WRITING!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 00:51 CDT
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that was a good chappy!!!!!! plz update really soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 28, 2004 19:41 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Hope the allergies improve soon and the writers block passes. Sorry for the delay in reviewing but been in Canada. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 16:40 CDT
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I really like this chapter please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: lilkawaiigurl88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 15:09 CDT
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You're a really good writer. Sorry I couldn't review earlier School was killing me. Update fast! I cant wait to see what happens next!
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