| "Busy Lives" Reviews/Comments [ 695 ] |
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH GREAT FIRST CHAPTER! I saw all the reviews you had for this story and it looked good so I'm going to start on this now also, I usaly don't read alternet Unaverise fic's but this one looked ok so great first chapter MANTEN! Lady kagome
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Title: busy lives
Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 17:30 CDT
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you have the best mind i've seen since i was born.not many stories catch my interest considering i don't read much except your stories.saying i look up to you is a little extreme but yeah you are one great person.^_^
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Title: *squee*!!
Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan On: August 17, 2005 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished and WHEE!!! Love love LOVE this fic. Like, love it TO DEATH!!! And yes, 'panties' is a very funny word xDDD I noticed that in chapter 56 Kagome and Inumuffin express their love for each other, but in chapter 60 Sango and Rin are bugging her about it and she thought to herself that "She just wasn't ready to tell him." Yes, I am nit-pick-y xD But seriously, that's, like, NOTHING. 'Coz this fic is too awesome to be bogged down in the LEAST by one little continuity issue. Hell, you could talk lyk dis da hole fic and it'd still be amazing. Anyways, I should really shut up now. ^^;
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Title: 5th time!
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am such a fan of Busy Lives. So whenever i want to read a good fic, i always turn to this. IT is my 5th time reading this. You may not know me on mediaminer but i used the username 'cutemoon'(haven't signed up)on fanfiction.net.
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Reviewed By: dogs rule On: July 15, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love this story after all most good stories need sequels and this one definetly should have a sequel ^______________________________________^
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: June 16, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was one of the sweetest stories I have ever read. I really enjoyed it. Please write more soon. P.S. Love YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lmc On: May 20, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fic so far...i just noticed one thing in chapter 22 that you might want to change: There was a window next to the bed. "It's nice." Inuyasha said. He set his things down. "Where's Shippo going to sleep?" "He'll probably share a room with Shippo." Kagome said. "If not, he can sleep in one of our rooms."
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Reviewed By: sheba948 On: April 13, 2005 12:26 CDT
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this story is GREAT! i have just one question: are Sessy and Inu demons/half-deemons? just want to clarify some things. thanx sheba949
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Reviewed By: inusasha On: April 02, 2005 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a good ending one of the best i ever read so, u don't have to do a sequle. but one would be nice kagome getting a child... thousands of little inuyasha's
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Title: I LOVE U!!!& YOUR FIC!!!
Reviewed By: BringMe2Life1490 On: March 08, 2005 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!! SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! U WIN A FREE BOWL OF RAMEN!!!!!! ::hands u bowl of ramen:: ENJOY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS FIC I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO KAWAII!!!!!!!!! I WANNA KICK KAGOMES GRANDPAW & HOJO IN DA BALLZ!!!!!!!!!!!! ::kicks them in da ballz:: OMG & I LOVE U FOR KILLING KIKYO OFF!!!!!! ::hugs u:: U KILLED HER SO PAINFULY I AM SO HAPPY!!!!!! 2DAY WUZ FCAT & YOUR FIC CHEERED ME UP I STAYED UP TILL LIKE 3 OR 4A.M READING YA FIC CUZ IT WUZ SO DAMN KAWAII!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEZ!!!!! I WANNA KNOW WUT HAPPENES!!! WELL I G2G IM GONNA WORK OUT I LOVE U!!!!!! JA NE!!!!! P.S: I LOVE THIS FIC ITS WAY KICK ASS!!!!!!
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Title: OMG ITS AWSOME
Reviewed By: Charlene On: March 08, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o..m..f..g... I LOVE U THIS FIC IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ!!!! IVE READ FAN FICS FOR ABOUT 3 YEARS NOW & I LOVE THIS FIC THE BEST!!!!! OMG ITS AWSOME ITS THE BEST EVER I WOULD GIVE U AM AWARD IF I COULD I AM BOWING TO YOUR FEET!!!!!!!!!!!!! I PASSED THIS FIC TO ALL MY FRIENDS ON MY BUDDY LIST WHICH IS 90 PPL I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS THE BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SWARE IM GOING TO TELL EVERYBODY ELSE!!!! OMG ITS SO KAWAII!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THERE OUTFITS THEY WHERE!!!!!! ME N MY FRIENDS LOVE THEM SO MUCH!!!!!!!! THERE KAWAII EVEN IF THEY DO SHOW ALOT OF SKIN THERE STILL KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE READ CHAPTER AFTER CHAPTER EVERYDAY!!! I EVEN SKIPED LUNCH AT SKOOL TO READ IT!!!!!!!! IF YA WANNA TALK I GOT AIM MY SCREEN NAME IS (BringMe2Life1490) OMG I LOVE THIS FIC ::HANDS U AWARDS FOR KAWAIIEST OUTFITS & MOST KICK AS FICS!!!!!:: I LUV IT!!!!! SO DOES EVERYONE ELSE U WILL GET TONS OF MORE REVIEWS I BET!!!! WELL I G2G I GOT STUFF TO DO!!!! I LOVE U!!!!! JA NE ^_^v
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: February 23, 2005 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a GREAT ending to a GREAT story!!!!!!! keep on writing get stories!!!
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Reviewed By: hrc (not logged in) On: February 14, 2005 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story, i loved it!
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Reviewed By: cutemoon On: February 13, 2005 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S OVER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM SO SAD, I THINK I'M GOOING TO CRY!!!!!!!!{for real!!}
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Reviewed By: inuangel82(to lazy to login) On: February 03, 2005 20:23 CST
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..........*speachless* great fic nice job, but one thing that gave me a laugh was when your wrote rested her lap in her head or something like that..That was hilareous although i still de pressd edward(my stupidity for you ^^;;;;) well that was a nice fic!Sayonara!
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