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Reviewed By: jennykitties On: June 28, 2004 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at least your friend is not moving permently to california like one of mine did. i cant wait till the next chapter comes although i cant read them at my house so i go around my friends.
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Reviewed By: jennykitties On: June 28, 2004 13:57 CDT
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Reviewed By: inuangel82(not logged in ) On: June 28, 2004 00:50 CDT
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hey!that was an awsome chappy!I luved it!I got allergies to so i'm gunna try and help u out kay? #1!use benadryl!it really works i tell ya!#2 instead of opening windows try using a fan or running an air conditioner with an air purifier near it.i think that's about it 4 now!o!also for fanfic ideas how about u make Christmas come round when Rin is having her baby or just make it snow or something!also when Rin has her baby u should make Sessh and Rin have some alone tym with the baby!I just went 2 a hospital 2day 2 see my dad's friend's new born child and i was lookin in on a couple next door and they looked so sweet 2gether!*also the baby was asleep and there was sum major fluff goin on!*hope it helps!Good luk wit those allergies!
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Reviewed By: inuangel82(not logged in On: June 28, 2004 00:42 CDT
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 00:20 CDT
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liked the chapter. fried my brain at the beach today, will review more later. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 23:06 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 21:22 CDT
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Kagome has been saying she going to visit Keada for the last few chapters, but she never gets around to it! Any way good chapter Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww this seemed too short
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Reviewed By: Taka TK On: June 26, 2004 10:45 CDT
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awww everyone's going to live together now! I love Inuyasha and Shippou; they're hilarious! Oh, and I hate Ji-chan!! Well thanks soo much for the update!! and congrats on your 50th chapter! (I forgot to say that last time) Hardly any authors can keep a story interesting for that long! good job!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 26, 2004 10:24 CDT
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niec update. =)
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 26, 2004 09:30 CDT
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Aww that sad about your friend. Take all the time you want!! Have fun ^_^. This was a good chapter, I like how Sessho it's going about the Rin situation, it's kind of funny. I cant wait till you're able to post another.
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe! i liked that chappy!! but i think u need to write more about the relationships themselves if u no what i mean but if u do not o well!! hope u update soon!! much love!!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 06:52 CDT
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that was a good chapter! And I love "Our time is running out" by muse! they rock! lol well I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: EnchantedLadyK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 10:41 CDT
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this is a really good fic u gotta update soon!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 19:08 CDT
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i really love your fic!!! you absolutely have to write more! or I'll have to make you suffer!(I'm always saying this, sorry, I can't help myself, but at least it's a proof I really like your fic!);) UPDATE SOON!
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