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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o) On: August 03, 2004 14:21 CDT
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Oh good for them. Inuyasha is so sweet when he's not paying attention. I almost died from a sweetness overload when he was going off about how much he loves Kagome. *collective 'aww!!!'* oh geeze it was so sweet. This was a great chapter too. I'm scared to know what will happen with the adoption person. But Inuyasha all dolled up in black and red? Did it just get hot in here?
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWW! LOL! Great chapter! Yay! They're ok now..PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 10:41 CDT
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LoL. Great chappie, they made up, as usual. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 00:47 CDT
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well that chapter certainly answered my last question lol. Wow... there's nothing better than make-up sex, is there? I'm glad everything worked out ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuangel82(not logged in) On: August 02, 2004 23:40 CDT
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i liked the chappy and thanks for the warning but one thing!It's Fushigi Yugi!Not Yuugi!Look at the manga if u want proof!
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 02, 2004 23:26 CDT
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that was a good chappy!!!!!!! i'm glad they made up!!!!!!!!!!!!! : ) plz update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 23:08 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Title: So far so good
Reviewed By: VillageIdiot On: August 02, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is excellent, keep it up... although there is one thing that you could do to improve a little, I noticed how you tend to use the same words over and over, specifically the word glare... try using some other words to replace it like 'angerly gazed...' if you see what I'm saying. Other than that, keep up the good work, your story is awesome.
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 02, 2004 21:08 CDT
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kagome was acting really stupid!!!!! she left inuyasha cuz he got mad at her for going to see kouga who tried to kidnap and rape her....i'd be mad at her too if i were inuyasha... he just wants to protect her so she wont get hurt but she's making it really diffcult!!!!!! she needs to come back and apolgize and make up!!!!!! inuyasha just loves her alot that way he always acts the way he dose and she needs to realize that!!!!!!!! plz update soon!!!! it was a good chappy too!!!!! lol....: )
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: August 02, 2004 18:08 CDT
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I knew sumthin like that wuz gonna happen. InuYasha can never keep his mouth shut. Update!
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Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. I'm also reading When we first Met and I like that fic to, but I ahve one little thing thats bothering me. Not important but still bugging me. You first said that Sesshomaru worked for ST Stock Company, but later on you said he worked for a bank. Which one is it? And I'm a guy and I don't drool over every hot girl i see on the street.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 17:45 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 01, 2004 15:38 CDT
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Excellent chapter! When will Inuyasha learn huh? Hopefully he can sort it out... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: inuangel82(to lazy to login) On: August 01, 2004 00:53 CDT
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okay i never asked for drama but am i am one person so yeah...another thing Tokyo is set up into districts.How do you think they fit a whole Disney Land in there?*coughs* incase u didnt get the hint Shinjuku is a district.*coughs*ur not dumb dont get the wrong impression dont hate me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I didnt know this until a few weeks ago either!Not ur fault!!!
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Title: lovin it!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (dam i thought i was signed in oh well) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think u should go up to 100 chappy's that would be fuuny and great i just love ur story !!!!! ^_^ keep up the good work!!! ^_^ update update update soon again please? i'll give u a COOKIE can InuYasha and Kagome do nothin but fight?!?!?!!?!?!? -_-;; *sigh* oh well ur fic and it's a good one at that too keep up the good work ur doin great!
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