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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 06:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Kagome is going to fall out. Why doesn't Keade just hire more people to work at the daycare?? And has Miroku ever thought that maybe the reason that more girls aren't coming to work for him is because they see what kind uniforms they would have wear? Anyway I hope you update soon, when is the drama going to start??
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww how sad for kag and I want to see/read what the unifoms look like!!!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 15:50 CST
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Great story, I love it! But Kagome's working herself waaaay too hard, she seriously needs some down time here! Oh well, anywayz, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Orb (can't sign in) On: February 23, 2004 19:34 CST
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SWEET! Another chapter!! I don't know what to think of Inuyasha at the point. So angsty!! Poor Sango Rin and Kagome...Hentai Miroku lol. I love to story and hope you can keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 14:56 CST
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HA! That was great! I can't wait to see what the new uniforms look like and what the girls will to do Kagome. It's sad that she does all that work and doesnt get any credit :
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 02:33 CST
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hey! kewl fic. hope you contineu sooon
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Title: wacami_emie
Reviewed By: emie On: February 22, 2004 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! KEEP RIGHTING! Oh and please dont put kikyo in the story...
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Reviewed By: vegetas girl On: February 22, 2004 06:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was rilly good defenatly shoould write more later
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 21:44 CST
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Interesting, though isn't Inuyasha being irresponsible if he has Shippo at home? No wonder Shippo doesn't consider him his father. Good start. I wanna see where this leads, even if you don't know yet.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww how cool i love this
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: February 20, 2004 15:21 CST
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This is a really good cstory!! I really liked it even tho it was the first chapter. I can already feel the possible conflicts that might come up between Kagome and Inuyasha....they're so stubborn sometimes! lol but thats how we all love them. Kepp the awsum stuff coming!
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Title: That was nice.
Reviewed By: Vellakitty(will I ever login?) On: February 20, 2004 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet of Kag, she does do too much for her friends. But I still want more!! This thing is starting out good. The mixture of naughty and nice, its a killer!!!! just keep it up and you'll do great!! Well later!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Pyro Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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This is really great! If you ever need any help because you have writer's block I'll be more than happy to help you. Anyway I love what you have so far.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 23:25 CST
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Yeah it's a good start! Keep on writing!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: kikyou_104(nis) On: February 19, 2004 22:51 CST
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i like it it's agood start.....YaY i'm the first person to reviw sorry i'm not signed in...Ja Ne
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