| "Busy Lives" Reviews/Comments [ 695 ] |
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 03:00 CST
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yep great story and please keep updateing u have fans ^_^
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: kanayekisho [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay that was really really really reaklly really really gooooooooood! I need to know more! Please please please please please UPDATE! I really like this troy and it is saved to my faves.
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Title: sweet chapter
Reviewed By: kagome_chan16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey sweet fic i love it could u e-mail me when u update plz i would be very great ful
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 14:26 CST
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well since im sighned in now ill review again XD. i re-read a couple chapters and YasashiiAme has a point...the missing commas cause a bit of confusion but its not too bad :3 update soon ^^;;
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 12:35 CST
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ah! dammit. i was all ready to go and read the next chapter but...there is no next chapter!...yet. still, i liked the little arguement and how inuyasha chose that time to ask her out. i always find that really funny
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh(not SIed) On: March 05, 2004 22:22 CST
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"Go out with me." ??? wow! how blunt O_O update soon! lol im excited!!!! HAHAHA and add more fluff damnit! XD
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!! USE COMMAS!!! It is getting VERY CONFUSING! Thank you for the Japanese word translations. I really hate stories with J-words unless if there are translations. Thanks again. Good job on the chapter. Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Lagra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (no time 4 signin' in!) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 16:48 CST
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Damn, InuYasha's being pretty straightforward, isn't he? Wonder what Kagome's reaction's gonna be to that? Anywayz, g2g, be back 4 da next update!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 15:09 CST
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Super great chappie. I'm glad Kagome is ok. Shippo is so cute ^__^. I have 23 new updates to read so I better get cracking. I cant wait till I get to your next updated chapter.
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Reviewed By: Zero Satotome On: March 05, 2004 01:39 CST
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Aww, yay! ^_^ He finally asked her out. I hope she says yes. Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Tangy_Lemon On: March 04, 2004 16:15 CST
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ok i feel like a dumb ass >_< i meant inu/kag...not kaff >_< im sucha fuckin dolt! sorry o.o!!! BTW update soonies!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh(not SIed) On: March 04, 2004 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
nice chapter. update again soon :3
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 16:12 CST
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Another okay chapter. I'm sorry, but the story is just dull. You might be trying to be realistic, but boring, everyday lives don't make good reading. So, yeah, you should spice up the story a bit.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (no time 4 signin' in!) On: March 04, 2004 16:12 CST
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Update soon!
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