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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 11:25 CST
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That was soo weird, I was thinking about Miroku making them wear cat suits half way through the chpter and then he did make them wear them!!!!!!!! Can you read minds??? Well good chapters but if you start bending spoons I'm outta here!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I real like read this story. I hope you up date so.
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job on the last few chapters! ^.^ update soon
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: March 27, 2004 21:59 CST
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MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: March 27, 2004 21:15 CST
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Poor Inu Yasha, can't catch a break.lol It wouls be interesting to see him at Kagome's house with her mother...and there's always that possibility of gramp coming home which would be awful. I cant wait for the next update ^__^.
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: March 27, 2004 18:17 CST
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heehee! ^^ Yay! Another chappie, but I want more. More~~~~~! Please!!! :gets thwacked over the head: T_T *hwie* I'll be here waiting for ch. 22 if you don't mind. :makes camp:
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Reviewed By: nagabrit On: March 27, 2004 17:00 CST
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loved the chapter!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 05:33 CST
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Awww! That was so cute at the end :D Good chapter, I wonder what will happen if Inuyasha says yes... heh
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 21:57 CST
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I love it I love it I love it ^__^
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter! Umm, can you tell me what ages Kagome and Inuyasha are? I think Kagome is 18, but I can't remember and I'm too lazy to check earlier chapters. Email me at returnofuranus@hotmail.com, please! :)
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: March 26, 2004 15:01 CST
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Aww! I loved it! ^_^ Are you gonna have Kagome take Inuyasha (and perhaps Shippo) with when she goes and sees her family? Lol. It'd be funny as well as adorable. Please keep writing! ^^
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 12:38 CST
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MOE!er...MORE!^^;; i wonder what sango's revenge will be???*thinks*
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 00:25 CST
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ooo tis a good chappie can't wait for more!!! keep up the good work. *hands you a cookie* u deserve one...mmmmmm Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki*not logged in! On: March 26, 2004 00:08 CST
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why hasn't she visited her family in a while? loved the chapter and can't wait until your next one! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 15:17 CST
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that was pleasantly unexpected. yay for fluff!
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