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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: February 20, 2004 15:21 CST
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This is a really good cstory!! I really liked it even tho it was the first chapter. I can already feel the possible conflicts that might come up between Kagome and Inuyasha....they're so stubborn sometimes! lol but thats how we all love them. Kepp the awsum stuff coming!
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Title: That was nice.
Reviewed By: Vellakitty(will I ever login?) On: February 20, 2004 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet of Kag, she does do too much for her friends. But I still want more!! This thing is starting out good. The mixture of naughty and nice, its a killer!!!! just keep it up and you'll do great!! Well later!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Pyro Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really great! If you ever need any help because you have writer's block I'll be more than happy to help you. Anyway I love what you have so far.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 23:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah it's a good start! Keep on writing!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: kikyou_104(nis) On: February 19, 2004 22:51 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it it's agood start.....YaY i'm the first person to reviw sorry i'm not signed in...Ja Ne
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