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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 13:56 CDT
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Kagome has the MEANEST grandfather!!!!! he sucks!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 10, 2004 11:16 CDT
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I knew it was her grandfather!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is so old fashion, he's the one who needs a whore!!!!! All that sexual tension built up over the hundred years he's been alive!!!!!!!!! And ya know as perverted as Miroku is he is the only one who can admit that he's in love with his girlfriend, that is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 01:35 CDT
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I like this chapter...please update soon...I can't believe how inuyasha stuck up for kagome.that shows you hes can make you feel great.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 00:47 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 09, 2004 17:39 CDT
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Um...um...I think that I am going to avoid that mental image of Kagome, Rin and Sango. Somehow I doubt I will appreciate the results. Excellent chapter! Look forwards to finding out what happens when Rin gets the results back and when Sesshomaru finds out... Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: Atma On: June 09, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the whole story. Especially chapter 45 (Ignored) because off the outfit kagome was wearing.. You really should really write a lemon with the girls making out with the guys while wearing the kitty outfits.. That would be Great.. The next outfit should be... a Kitsune(fox) outfit... that would be cool.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: June 09, 2004 16:24 CDT
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Ah, it's probably Miroku or someone else like that who forgot their stuff at the club. Anywayz, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Taka TK On: June 09, 2004 15:24 CDT
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Baka cliffies! haha Sango was making fun of Kagome saying Inuyasha was so controlling, meanwhile Kagome has sooo much control over him ^_^ We still didn't find out about Rin!! I reeaallly hope you update soon or I'm sure that a few rabid fans will be after you!! (but I know how quality takes time so don't rush!!)
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Title: I gotta outfit suggestion!
Reviewed By: XxLeahxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is fun to read and a little more light hearted then some of the ones i've read it's great update soon i wanna know Seshy's reaction! yeah but i gotta outfit suggestion! i think you should do a black boostia* ((srry i'ma bad speller!)) with a SHORT skirt and a pair of garters* and stocking with big heals! black-Sango Red-Kagome White-Rin... i think they should all come with somethin to like sango gets a whip kagome gets a pair of devil horns and rin gets a hallow* HeeHee §Leah§
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: June 09, 2004 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz update soon!!!!!!!! i lOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
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Title: A ha
Reviewed By: Ldypebsaby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 06:41 CDT
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Ha! I bet it's Hojo or her Gramp's!! Is it one of them?
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 23:49 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MEOW THIS IS GOOD AND PLEASE PUT MORE INU KAG LEMONS
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 22:24 CDT
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hey I like it even the ending was great...funny how inuyasha can be pissed off and than wants to kiss her the next...please update soon.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 08, 2004 21:51 CDT
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I bet it's Kouga!!!!!!!!!!! Or Miroku palying a joke, or her grandpa stalking her or something!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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