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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: May 20, 2004 18:59 CDT
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Yay! Finally the lemon! LoL, Inu finally got some! It's about time, seeing as he was the only one who hadn't! InuYasha's right, he's definitely gotta buy a lock for the door...^_~. Update soon, I'm lovin' this!
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 23:49 CDT
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I really like your fic I don't want this story to end.I like that you put inyuash and kagome together finally please keep writting this story I really like it.
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: May 19, 2004 14:59 CDT
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lemon....*drools* it was excellent!update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: May 19, 2004 07:09 CDT
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Whoo-hoo! They finally hooked up all the way! Yay for Inuyasha and Kagome!! ^_^ :shakes fist at Kouga being mean to Kagome...AGAIN: They need to get some sort of security at the club or something. You know, a bouncer. I dunno who, but yeah... Anyways, this fic just got better ^_^ so please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 19, 2004 00:38 CDT
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Yyyuuuummm lemon!!!!!! It was romantic but could have been more original a little longer. But it was sweet and that's good enough for me!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 23:25 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* On: May 18, 2004 23:21 CDT
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ooo yay, i thought that it would never come. But hey, its all good. *slices koga in half w/ her scythe* that'll teach you to molest the unwilling! muhahahaz jk well please keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: inuangel82(not logged in) On: May 18, 2004 22:40 CDT
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I had to skip over the lemon part but I feel bad 4 kag.I wouldn't want to get pregnant if i was 18 either.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 20:30 CDT
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Aww that was such a sweet lemon....wow, ironic or what lol. This chapter was really well done. It was totally tasteful and didn't seem like just a lemon. It still had the element of the characters, not just their actions. Yay!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 18, 2004 18:20 CDT
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Very nice. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: RabidFanGirl On: May 18, 2004 17:54 CDT
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HAPPY HAPPY JOY JOY!!! THE LEMON IS HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm lovin it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFanGirl On: May 18, 2004 17:03 CDT
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Hey Queenie! Mega cool chapter...I just really want to kill Kouga..who the heck does he think he is...grrrr *beats Kouga with a frying pan* STUPID OOKAMI!!!!
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Reviewed By: jennykitties On: May 18, 2004 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i told you i would write another review. i thought your new chapter was excellent. up date soon.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme (take a wild guess) On: May 17, 2004 23:03 CDT
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Wow, I didn't know you posted on ffnet... anyway, I don't mind the wait in chapters. Enjoyed this chapter, bit of force from our loveable Kouga. I hope you update soon ^^
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