| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* On: June 25, 2004 04:02 EDT
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ooo yay ye updated! Keep up the great work. This chapter was funny as hell. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 20:11 EDT
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they r soooo cute together!!!!!!!!!!! i hope u update really really soon!!!!!!!! : )
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Reviewed By: someone-that-loves-your-story On: June 24, 2004 19:42 EDT
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OH GOD. You have GOT to be kidding me. Why the hell is Kagome acting so...uhm...what's the word...OOC. Don't get me wrong, I love your story, it's just the way Kagome acts is soo wrong. It should be Inuyasha crawling to Kagome and asking to sleep with her. Not the other way around. But besides all that, your story is great!
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Title: you are evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: anarie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could you end the story that way !!!!! you need to nake a sequal beginning where it left off . if not i will be mad at you i want you to fix it i loved the story but hated how you ended it you lady e-mail me on updates or response to this at anarie65@hotmail.com thank you love anarie
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Reviewed By: queenserena(not signed in) Who's suprised? On: June 23, 2004 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*/Rin:*jumps up and down*KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!/Okay then Rin, quick question, what is jiji? I put it in a couldn't come up with anything that made sense. I sure as hell know what kuso means.../Rin:Rin wants Rebekuka to find out things on her own, Rin will not tell her.*folds arms*/Oh shut up Rin!*ounches her on top of head*/Rin:*eyes well up* Ow...
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was a great chapter. Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:04 EDT
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that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! i hope inuyasha picks kagome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! even though koga and inu are sooo cute together...he should pick kagome : ) well, plz update really really soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW HOW SWEET
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: June 22, 2004 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAY! So happy right now!! I thought they were gonna...ya know...make babies, too! LMAO! I would have choked on my food, too if I were Mayu which was too funny! Ok I'm gonna shut up now so you can concentrate on more important/intelligent things other than this rant from me. LOL ~_^
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know about having a threesome with Kouga, but I like the fact that Inu and Kag are getting closer. They seem to complete each other, where one is lacking the other will hold strong for them both. True Kouga has helped Inu in the past, but Kagome can keep him leveled and push him to want more. I just feel that with Kouga he will settle for what he has instead of pushing for more. Kouga will try to control or dominate him, where Kagome pushing his buttons and allows him to be himself. I'm not saying to change it. It's just my opinion.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 20:03 EDT
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I sooooo love ur story it was so funny when Mayu almost choked on her food! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: June 22, 2004 19:44 EDT
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LOL, DERRRR! houjos DEAD, lol, my bad. how the hell do you forget something like that??? only suteki. lets see...other guy he can fall for, besides miroku...Bankostu is pretty hot, or how a bout naraku!!! lol, another dun dun dunnn. naraku hasnt been used yet right??? dont think so, or freakin A hes inuyashas dad istn he? ya know wat, i give up! f### it! lol
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: June 22, 2004 19:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! fluff fluff fluff!!!!! LOVED IT! thanks for the fluff, hehe, as always. i almost choked when kagome asked to put the kids in martial arts classes, my little bro (6) and little sis (4) just signed up for it, although i begged my mom not to, for fear of my life, lol. hehe, cute though. DUMP KOUGA INU-CHAN!!! you should have kouga fall for someone else, like a girl! dun dun dunnn (ayame, lol) or a guy like Houjo!!!!! now that would be creepy, lol. update soon!!!! (as you always do, just feel like i need to say it anyways....dont know why) ~*~*~suteki~*~*~
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Reviewed By: Dunyasha26(offline) On: June 22, 2004 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an interesting story. Quite unique. Thou I really wasn't fond of Kouga and Inuyasha a couple. I hate yaoi but Kagome and Inuyasha as a couple caused me to read it. Really fascinating. Thou I'm not quite sure how you will cause poor Inuyasha to choose between Kagome and Kouga. Anyways, great fic overall!!^_- ~DunYasha26~
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed in) On: June 20, 2004 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a great story! this is really great story plot! Please keep up the good work and update asap. So is Inu still dating Koga? and Where is Fluffy? Ha! Hojo got his just deserts! well can't wait to find out what happens next! Your story is very exciting. Krystal.
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