| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Reviewed By: HeeroYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 02:06 EDT
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I been waiting, and waiting, and waiting for a very, very, very, very long time. You skipped the sex? Man, I was hoping for a good lemon. Even so, it doesn't make the story bad. This is still one of the greatest stories I've ever read. This chapter sounds like it could be a good place to leave off if you didn't want to continue the story (even though it would be dissappointing). I'm glad to see that Kags and Inu have made up and are happy. She was working enough jobs wasn't she? That takes a really devoted person to pull off. My mom has worked 4 jobs at one time (2 being full time), and it was hell. Never try it because it will lead to an emotional and mental breakdown. Whether you continue this story or not, I still congratulate and thank you for writing such a superb piece of fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY you finally updated...wow so they finally slept together huh...but wats gonna happen with koga!! ahhh neway great chapter hurry with the next!!
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Reviewed By: me On: August 24, 2004 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 22:41 EDT
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So I take it that they finally had sex. I'm surprised that Inu's mom would treat her like that. After everyting Kag has done to protect the children and help Yash. To me if he were my son and Kag was still there to help out I would have made sure that she had all the help she needed. At least Kouga stayed to help out as much as she would let him.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 21:20 EDT
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cools beans. so what happened to Kagome?
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Title: Falling for the babysitter
Reviewed By: The_Huntress On: August 23, 2004 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love the story so far it is flippin amazing! I have like a hundred emails from mediaminer about stories but i had to find this one first... Anyway i was just wondering if Chappie 66 was gonna be the last chapter, cuz no offence but i didnt think it gave credit to this awesome story!! :D Well i g2g luv 'n' hugs, Ai Shiteru, Assassin_Chiq
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 (not logged in ) On: August 22, 2004 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Joe Higashi~~Money can't buy you love but it sure is easy to rent sometimes~ says: and; Kiyoshi-Love, the kind you clean up with a mop and bucket, like the lost catacombs of Egypt, only god knows where we stuck it. i dont understand this. and i thought this: Kiyoshi-Love, the kind you clean up with a mop and bucket, like the lost catacombs of Egypt, only god knows where we stuck it. was written by The Blood Hounds Gang~ Bad Touch
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Reviewed By: Rice Ball On: August 22, 2004 16:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! Please?
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Reviewed By: KagomeWol26 On: August 20, 2004 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm lets see...July 31??? *starts to cry* Well I just want to say that I really love this fanfic and I hope you update this soon.
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Title: MORE!!
Reviewed By: YASHAGRL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must.........have.........MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!! The anime side of my brain is starving and needs MORE!!
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Tsubasa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 19:30 EDT
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OKay, nevermind about not being able to login.
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Tsubasa (wont let me login) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never expected him to run out on them like that, but then again, I dont think anyone did. Please keep the chapters coming because I really want to know what comes next.
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 04, 2004 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really reallly love this story i mean i love everything about this story but u got to update make more chapters!! i meed to know whats going to happen.You cant leave it at where its at! I feel so confused cuz im not sure if Inuyasha came back to be with kagome and stay with her or if he is back for no one!! I cant figure out who he chose!!! Someones got to tell me and all i have to say is it better be kagome!! please let it be kagome!! please im beggin you!! I know koga might be hurt and sad but he will live and still be there.Kagome needs him likie he needs her.You cant just but koga and inuyasha together i mean what about poor kagome who would kill herself for him to be happy.She will surely die id there not together. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE KAGOME AND INUYASHA GET TOGETHER NO MATTER WHAT!! I need this to be and inuyasha and kagome pairing in the end else ill die of sadness.So please dont me mean !!! Let kagome and inuyasha get together please!! Its not my story and i cant tell you what to do but this is what i really want to happen so please try and make me happy!! ** crys** **pouts**wines** crys**gives you puppy eyes** PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(whipes away tear) On: August 02, 2004 18:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks back* Is it just me, or does the story seem a bit messed up?/Rin:Stupid computer! Your mom just had to switch the internet to this one!/Because I was playing Pharaoh on the other one!We'll re-read it whe she's done with the internet on this one./Rin:Hai...
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Reviewed By: The Miko (no Suteki) On: August 02, 2004 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i fought back tears throughout that whole chapter. if i wasnt at work right now, i would have let them go, believe me, it was hard. but hold on, this wasnt the last chapter was it????????? pleaaasssseee dont tell me its over, please please please please! if im just stupid, and it really isnt over, do u have any idea of how many more chapters until it is>?? please email me and let me know. (inu_luver14@yahoo.com) arigatou! ;) your faithful reader/reviewer~*~*~ suteki~*~*~
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