| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7891 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 07:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your a good writer, most people lack details but you have done a great job including the details that bring the story to life. As for spelling and grammar there are very few mistakes I think your story is very creative and I love the fact that you aren't afraid to be dark. I really enjoyed reading your story. There was only one thing I didnt like. I like how you didnt move too fast with Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship, but I mean it was like 40 chapters before they even kissed and the suspense was killing me. Overall, your story was really creatie and interesting. I loved the dark style and the story definitely kept my attention.
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Title: Falling For The Baby Sitter
Reviewed By: Aisha (aka Kags14) & Aris (aka IYLove) On: October 04, 2005 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the bomb, it was bangin'. Keep writing. Write 3 more. We both were shocked when we found out that Y guy was working for Jin also. I mean damn. This was, i mean, god we both don't even have words to describe what we thought. This should be made into a movie, even though we were pissed during the beginning that he was gay, until we read that he was bisexual, we are still pissed but we are excepting that he is bi and somewhere in the story, he better end up with Kagome or go to rehab and come out straight as an arrow. He gate should just swing right, not left, maybe both ways, but not left, but he better end up with Kagome, PLEASE!!! We're both your HUGE fans of this story. When we found out that there was three (3) more chapter, we sprung on the computer and read these mother f***ers!!!!!! Update by next week or before the 18th of October. We waited for almost a year, update quick or we will gut you like a fish and make it look like a bloody accident. ::laughs:: we are just playin' wit ya. But seriously, update a.s.a.p. From your Huge fans Ja ne Kags14 & IYLove
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Reviewed By: baka kitsune brat gurl On: October 03, 2005 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! New chapter, update soon, I'm mega nervous and excited!
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Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 19:15 EDT
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Hey it's been a long while so please update some juicy goodness! Trujinx
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Title: ur story roxs
Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 19:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV UR STORY!!!! ur story is one of the best i have ever read, how many more ch till its over??? can u email me when u update??? that would be very helpful, my email is spygirl3034@yahoo.com
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Title: bb
Reviewed By: bb On: September 03, 2005 11:54 EDT
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Reviewed By: LOVEHANYOU On: September 01, 2005 04:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU BETTER FREAKING UPDATE! OR ELSE
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Title: bb
Reviewed By: bb On: August 31, 2005 21:45 EDT
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Reviewed By: x-rated On: August 31, 2005 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so mabye my rartings are a little wonky but i just wanted to get them, out of the way. i suck at english so don't go by my judgement. but anyway i really really really like this story so please write more. cuz it makes me happy. and is it gonna stay a kagome/ inu fic cuz i kinda liked the koga/inu better. anyway keep it up.
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Reviewed By: luvya On: August 27, 2005 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update i can't wait another month or so! update asap!!!
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Title: wtf
Reviewed By: exentrik225 On: August 11, 2005 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh...so...is like...inuyasha gay?!
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Title: wtf
Reviewed By: exentrik225 On: August 11, 2005 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh...so...is like...inuyasha gay?!
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Reviewed By: rotucci On: July 28, 2005 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 02:07 EDT
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great last chapter.. i love the way you twist and turn the plot slash story line thing... you guys keep things excited..... i wish you would update down by the bay... but we'll see how that goes please update soon
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Title: freshice~NSI
Reviewed By: freshice [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 13:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When i first started reading this fanfic, i was like O_O wtf because of all the grammer errors. however, as i continued to read it, i realized it was getting better and better. the last few chapters have been getting a bit harder to read with the huge paragraphs and such, and i hope that will cease.. to tell you the truth, i like the idea of kouga and inuyasha, and i didnt really like the way inuyasha just CHANGED all of a sudden and started becoming a bit bitter even towards Kouga. it seemed a bit unfair :/ anyways, good work! ja ne!
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