| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 11:24 EDT
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boot
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 16:37 EDT
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This is soooo good. Mayu asking about sex was sooo funny i LOVE this fic plz update SOON!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 14:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles*/Rin:Does Rin sound Mayu?/No Rin, you ask even more questions that are absolutley stupid!/Rin:Oh, okay then!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 05, 2004 23:31 EDT
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Nice.
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: June 05, 2004 17:29 EDT
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grr, false advertisement false advertisement! u were trying to get my hopes up with the wholoe 'sex' thing in the title, lol. i do agree though that kagome is getting more and more pathetic, but i DO NOT agree that kouga should win inus heart. uv already made it apparent that inu has fallen for kagome, so, yeah. anywho, update soon!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 05, 2004 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This story has hooked me against my will. I think it got me when little Mayu stole my heart! Gomen, but I find Kagome to be annoying, pitful and a pathetic would-be sedutress. There are redeeming qualities she has like being a good mom, her cooking & cleaning, open-mindness but the way she hits on Inu makes me want to strangle the shit out of her. I like Kouga alot. Inuyasha is hurting and all she can think about is getting in his pants?? She irritates the fuck out of me. I hope she does not get what she wants b/c I feel that Kouga is good for him, and she is just a victim and would drag him down. They are better off as friends. *shrug* this is not constructive criticism at all just my opinion which ain't worth the paper this would be printed on (LOL). Otherwise, you guys rock as a team. The whole vampire subculture is fascinating. The first time I attended an event it blew me away! the people were all nice to me eventhough I was NOT a part of the scene. So, in the meantime I will keep reading so that Kagome will keep bugging me and the story will keep intriguing me.
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Reviewed By: blacksun1 On: June 05, 2004 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rox!!!!!!! Can't wait for the rest of it. Write on!!!! Peace out.
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Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 13:22 EDT
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boot
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(offline) On: June 05, 2004 11:43 EDT
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good.. lol about the sex thing with Mayu that was hilarious. i coldn't stop laughing. for a little girl like her, she sure knows alot. It was kinda weird that Hojo was the bad guy considering her liked Kagome in the real episodes but hey, it was good. are Kagome and Inuyasha going to get together in the end? IF they are, i suggest that when inuyasha tells koga that they shouldn't be together again, koga should already have someone like...Ayame of Koharu so Koga wolnd't be heart-broken and want revenge from Kagome. Anyways, I'm just suggesting. love your story! Update and keep up the good work!
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Title: This Rocks!!
Reviewed By: Bishounenhaven On: June 05, 2004 04:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, u are so good at writing! This story has me waiting at my computer for new chapters! I love how u drag out the suspense and the love situation between Kagome and InuYasha. And Miroku is of course funny as hell! "Damn Sango, your rough. I like it." I loved that line. Keep it up dude, this is the best fanfiction i've ever read. U are the bomb!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: June 04, 2004 21:24 EDT
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auuwwwww, quality time, how cute. what the hell was she singing? i only caught a few words. anywho, that was cute and update sooooooonnn!!!!!!!! ~*~suteki~*~
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Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 19:27 EDT
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boot
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Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 19:26 EDT
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I live for this fic. And I think it is so adorable that the clerk said that Mayu looked like InuYasha... [cries] Pleas update soon!
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Reviewed By: AngleOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: June 03, 2004 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!! Please update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter!!! AngelOfDiamonds ~Lia~
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy likew reading your stroy it give me some to read at night went I get the compter at night. I hope you up date so.
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