| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: May 03, 2004 17:27 EDT
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^___________________________________^ me likey this chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (for some reason cant stay logged on for long) On: May 03, 2004 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the mall thing was pretty cool. kagome throwing her shoe at sesshie reminded me of austin powers, lol. 'who throws shoes?' (dont remember the line perfectly) bring on the kinky vampire stuff! is there gonna be anymore inu/kag vamp action? i hope so, it was pretty hot last time, lol. your corupting me! im reading a story with gay vampire feaks! lol, jk, i love your story. the scene with nazuna and kag was pretty stinkin funny. hurry and update! me wanna see vamp party! ~*~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~*~*~
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 06:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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its depressing but its good. the vampire thingy was pretty exciting (another thing im new too) you sure know a lot about horses i noticed, and everclear. damn, everclear is NOT something u can drink straight easily. i took a shot of it (for 5 bucks) and the stuff nearly melted my throat away, lol. strong shit right there. its good! cant wait to see what happens at the vamp party thing. update soon! please! hehe. ;) ~*~*~*~*SUTEKI~*~*~*~
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Reviewed By: Patsita On: May 02, 2004 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic~! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: May 02, 2004 22:33 EDT
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hehe love what your doing with the story! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic On: May 02, 2004 16:36 EDT
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hehe
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(off) On: May 02, 2004 16:36 EDT
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update dude!
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Title: I'm not trying to write your fic... Just voicing my thoughts.
Reviewed By: Kat a/k/a ladykaa28 On: May 02, 2004 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't like Kouga being so possessive of Inu, but it's your fic so I'll go with it. I just want Kagome and Inu together. For some reason they just fit in this fic. I can't explain why I feel that way, but they just do. From what he has been through and what she has/is going through they just seem to fit. The way he is acting it's like he can't stand for her not to talk to him or be upset about anything. It's almost like he is forcing himself to be with Kouga to keep him happy. When he's with Kagome he just seems to be more free about his feelings. I don't know, it's just crazy thoughts going through my head.
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(off) On: May 02, 2004 12:02 EDT
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UPDATE DUDE!! IM WAITING!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 10:44 EDT
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Rin:REBEKUKA AND RIN ARE HAPPY! WE ARE YOUR 40th REVIEWER! YEAH!!!!!!*jumps up and down* /Rin! Where are you! I HAVE TO DRAW YOU!/Rin:Oh, Hai, Rebekuka-chan!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin:Rebekuka is not going to finish that story if she puts in every little detail. Rin knows she has till June 3, and @ midnight on June 4th, Rin and Rebekuka are going with friends to see Harry Potter. She claims it will be in celebration of her writing her first ever chapter story completely. But Rin is good, Rin encourages Rebekuka-chan! Oh yeah, Rebekuka wanted Rin to tell you to keep writing, or else she's going to turn you into Moon Dust. She did it to Jessica-chan!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 21:42 EDT
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Rin:*drums fingers on keyboard*Rebekuka-chan has to write her story again. Rin does'nt like summerizing things for her anymore...
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guess who's back!/Rin:Oh no...Rebekuka's gonna start singing.../What? I like Eminem!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok it's about time for Kagome and Inuyasha to get together. What they need is a whole day alone without Kouga, Shippou, Souta or Mayu (I think I speeled her name right). Just the two of them and good anime to set the mood. (Yes I said anime, I have seen some good ones). Let nature take it's course. With her daughter alredy liking Inu, she won't have to worry about that. And since Inuyasha likes Kagome anyway even though he tries to hide it, he should just get over it and jump her bones a.s.a.h.p. (as soon as humanly possible). The baby that he should have had with Kikyo has already been born to Kagome.
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Reviewed By: BlackX On: May 01, 2004 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. I just read the whole story in one go and it's really great. There are just some minor things I'd like to comment on (if only I could remember now...), for example I thought Inu's mom was embarrassing him in front of Kag a little fast (I mean without knowing her) or him talking about his fiancee like it was years ago when he's only 19. And at some points I thought he was behaving too much like an ass to remain likeable. Though he's really sweet when Mayu appears. Oh, there were so many things to say and I seem to have left my brain. I like the jealousy between Kouga and Kag. And Mayu's too cute. And will you pair up Miroku and Sango? Well, anyways, I greatly enjoyed this fic so far, so update soon. I want to read MORE!!!
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