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Title: 100!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Once again...I know what you're thinkind, stupid Serena's back... On: May 16, 2004 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen, I just had to!/Rin:She use to do that on some other boards too./The Harry Potter boards, we'd throw parties for the author, they had little icons like coffee and brownies./Rin: Rin tried to eat one.../They were better when my mom made them and while I put up the icon, I'd take a bite. Everyone would be jealous.../Rin:Didn't you say one of those you go to is having a party?/ They'd tll me to go away again./ Rin:Oh.../Yeah, thanks for not kicking me off like all the others!/Rin:Arigatou! Brownie?*holds up a chocolate brownie*
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Reviewed By: ...You know me... On: May 16, 2004 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin:Does Rin act like Mayu?/No, you're not sweet enough, but you love to give me headaches./Rin:Good!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 15:09 EDT
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I think Kagome should start acting more like an adult than a spoiled child who isn't getting their way. She says such inappropriate things around the kids, I mean does she want them saying such foul language as well. She's blaming everyone about her situation, but she put herself there in the first place. And it's like she doesn't want to heal, since she keeps fighting with InuYasha. She's getting on my nerves! She needs to grow up!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 04:31 EDT
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Nice Chapter. But Houjo must have really done something wrong to Kagome to get a reaction like that.
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Reviewed By: ...The damn lazy one is back... On: May 15, 2004 10:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL.../Rin:Rebe-chan, you don't have to swear!/What do I always tell Angel? I don't give a fuck?/Rin:*sigh*Alright...
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Reviewed By: da_youngsta12 On: May 15, 2004 08:22 EDT
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Okay, why the hell would Kouga need a condom if he's having sex with a MAN?!?!? Men can't have babies. That's just... wrong. And WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT when you said Kouga was Inuyasha's mate? I REALLY don't think that's possible. AND what the hell is wrong with Kagome? And that wasn't a lemon between Kagome and Inuyasha [in real life] that was a dream. Anyways! Now thaty's out of my system.... I LOVE YOUR STORY! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! PLEASE?!
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Reviewed By: yayayaya On: May 15, 2004 08:13 EDT
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what are the pairings? I've never figured that out yet. And whos with Kagome? Inuyasha? Kouga? Miroku? iono! JUST TELL ME!! loh and update please.
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (not online) On: May 15, 2004 02:37 EDT
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that was pretty exciting! fucking inuyasha, taking his anger out on the wounded woman of his freakin twisted dreams! lol. nice one, and it was cool how her delirium paid off, and she ended up saving the kids, hehe. thanx for the double dose! and cant wait for the next update! ;)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 15, 2004 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang. You know what I just realized. You never mentioned who stabbed her. Could it have been or ex? And about her ex and the last statment she spoke, is he really there or is she dillusional? Grant fic keep it up.
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 21:46 EDT
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I can't believe Kagome! She was always preaching to InuYasha about staying in bed because of his broken ribs, but she doesn't even listen to her own advice. She makes me angry! I can't stand the way she's acting in this story, she's just so immature! And what is she talking about? Is Hojo really there or is she being dilutional?!
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Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know there wasn't a lemon between Inu and Kag in there at all, but I absolutely LOVE this story. Make Kagome a gothic dresser more often. And I love how often you reveiw (more tan me).
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Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know there wasn't a lemon in there at all, but I absolutely LOVE this story. Make Kagome a gothic dresser more often. And I love how often you reveiw (more tan me).
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345(do you actually trhink that I am going to sign in?) On: May 14, 2004 17:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin:Rebekuka isn't going to bother to repeat herself anymore.
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Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: May 14, 2004 17:25 EDT
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Great chapters!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 08:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea what to think... At first I thought an Inu/Kouga fic wouldn't be good but then it is. But Kag and Inu have feelings for each other and they are both holding out. I just don't know which couple to root for Inu/Kouga or Inu/Kag. It it was a perfect world it would just be a threesome for them. But I don't know. Personally I think Kag needs to find a new guy and leave Inu/Kouga alone. It is just hurting too many people. And poor Inu is stuck in the middle. But this is a great fic. Never read one like it before. Keep it up.
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