| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Title: falling in the with babysitter
Reviewed By: ktk On: May 01, 2004 08:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you been right about kagome and mayu its great this is a neat stoire i like it better any stoire i ever read and i hope you right i think its funny about inuyasha and kouga being lover and kagome geting mad over it
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Title: falling in the with babysitter
Reviewed By: ktk On: May 01, 2004 08:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you been right about kagome and mayu its great this is a neat stoire i like it better any stoire i ever read and i hope you right i think its funny about inuyasha and kouga being lover and kagome geting mad over it
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl (on ff.net) On: April 30, 2004 20:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
i really hope you update soon because your one of the best authors ever so you should really update
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Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: April 29, 2004 23:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe man that was sooo close to some inu/kag stuffies! Keep the updates coming! I love your writing style
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 17:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(offline) On: April 29, 2004 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update dude!!!
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Reviewed By: IzzYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 03:42 EDT
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Mleh..thing messed up.. I had more to sayyyy!! Anyways. PLEASE update soon. I adore this ficcy. Serisouly. It is in the top 3 in my likeys. U.P.D.A.T.E.!!!!!!!!!!!! Pretty please with a cherry on top?
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: IzzYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GORSH!! I adore this fic. Seriously. I espescially like the last chapter, since I am very intrigued with vampires.
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Good story sofar. I was looking thru the Inuyasha area, and saw your story, and was intrigued by it. I really like how you're written the story, keeping the characters somewhat original, yet going off on a totally new tangent. I would have never thought to read a story where Inuyasha and Kouga were together (even though it's an AU story, it's still a good pairing). I was thinking... Maybe I'm letting the cat out of the bag here, but could it be that Mayu and Kagome are related very closely?... I guess it just all comes down to the old saying "We each carry our own secrets." I would have never thought that Inuyasha would have bit Kagome in the club, but it fits into the story very well. I like how the story is turning out to be, please write more to it, and soon... *puts story on my top 10 list* Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 28, 2004 21:36 EDT
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awwww mayu was cute!you get kouga-kun! hehe anyways i hope you update soon! i especially love the part when they went to that vampire club because i really love vampires
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 19:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome awesome!! Hojo is such a jerk. Kagome deserves Mayumi. (sp?) LOL. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Joyous PA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 18:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an adorable chapter, I used to babysit a little boy who was just like Mayu.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 28, 2004 16:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
awwww...that was so cute. the little girl is so adorable! i can't wait until your next chapter!
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Title: SO TOTALLY SORRY!
Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(offline) On: April 28, 2004 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah... that was totally soo wrong of me to do... litteraly. i'M SOOOO SORRY!!! Accept my apology. I was very high. I had like 10 candy balls, 2 chocolate almonds, hearshys, cookies. Mostly junk food, anyways, i wasn't thinking of what i was typing so i'm sorry. I love your story.... but i just want to get one thing out of my system...........is this story a inu/kouga pairing? If it is... it's okay... it's your call. But. If it is...who's kag paired with? Anyways! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 00:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
Really loving this :) Please update soon!
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