| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Title: 78
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2013 16:18 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.... those three... if one isn't hurt then the others two are! please just make them a happy threesome couple!!!!! they could by mommy, daddy, and papa or something! I feel so bad for them, you are cruel to your characters :D anyways can't wait to read more! |
Title: 75
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2013 15:48 EST
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you know, that is the second time she has just left a gun laying around at a crime scene after she uses it to kill some one..... |
Title: 66-67
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2013 13:32 EST
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i don't know if it was intentional or an accident, but the last half of chapter 66 and chapter 67 are the same.... |
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2013 21:07 EST
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Why don't they just get into a threesome relationship, then no one would have hard feelings! |
Title: 21
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2013 12:57 EST
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oh my god Mayu is so damn cute!!!! I love how she is tormenting Kouga..... |
Title: :[
Reviewed By: xRainbow_Piercingsx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2010 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I would love to know what happens. You've come this far, don't abandon it now! :[ I love this story. It's so creative and I an just imagine everything that is going on as I read.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 02:27 EDT
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NOOOO!!!! 78 Chapters and their hasnt been an update since aug 4, 2009!!!!!!! You have taken this amazing wonderful story way to far to not update anymore!!!!!! Its to fantastic to let die!! Please update soon!!!!!!! and dont give up on the story! I LOVE IT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2009 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THINK THIS IZ A AWSOME STORY!!! I LOVED IT!!! I HOPE U UPDATE REAL SOON!!!! PLZ DON'T LEAVE US HAGING THERE!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Congratulations!!!!!!
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 23:51 EDT
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Congratulations! You've been rec'd! The Reader's Have Chosen is a new fanfiction recommendation community dedicated to finding the best of the best in fandoms across the boards, and sharing them with other authors and avid readers. Your story, "Falling For the Baby Sitter", has been rec'd and is now being voted on in the Monthly Poll: Inuyasha. Fellow fandom-aficionados will vote for their favorites of all the recommendations, and the stories with the most votes will be posted on the front page. You can find our website at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com You can find the Inuyasha Monthly Poll at (without spaces): http:// thereadershavechosen. eternflame. com/ forum/ index. php? topic= 1265.0 ~Cat
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Title: much better
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 17:03 EDT
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I like this style much better!! It's easier to read and understand. Plus there's a TON more detail! Arigato!! Syanora! - till next time that is! 0.~
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Title: finishitfinishitfinishit PLEEEEEAAAAASSSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2009 16:53 EDT
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I love it!!! 'And so the plot thickens...'
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 00:08 EDT
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Welcome back, welcome back. It's wonderful to see your voice again. I hoped if I waited long enough, you'd update. You've put way to much into this story to leave it at that, so, Welcome back.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do i do!! i love u for updatin!! lol... its been 2 yrs!! TWO!!! But when i saw the notification, memories of what i've read ever so long kept invadin my mind! TOO SHORT!!! .. I hope u'll continue n dont make it a ritual of updatin once every 2 yrs... my love would deminish >< ... it will i'm telling u! lol I'm jus happy n shock u updated... really place a smile on my sleepy face x]
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh gosh.. i just got to the last chapter and read it and i was thinking... is it done? it says completed but there's so much more of the story that could be elaborated on... Banks house... kouga's reaction... its just wow.. but i can also see how it could end there... since kagome and yasha are finally together and if that is what you'll were going for in the beginning then its completed.. but hey i want to know about the baby and the other stuff i mentioned...but ya back to what i read, this has to be one of the best stories i have ever read.. i loved it... i mean it was a little weird at first with kouga and yasha being intimate when they hate each other in cannon but once you get past that.. the story is amazing... i just hope for at least an epilogue so its more resolved.. it kinda feels like it just ends... but alas, i loved it none the less... keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 00:55 EST
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the finally admitted it.. gosh.. took em long enough!!!
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