"Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 11:29 EST Comment/Review: Whoa. Keep up the great work. coolsa. What is going to happen now? What happened to Kagome? There seems to be something bad in the closet. So who is Inu going to choose? Will it be Kouga, Kagome or both?
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Reviewed By: booter On: November 12, 2004 23:29 EST Comment/Review: boot
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 19:18 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *laughes*That would be something my mom would do my brother...'No, it's your mother, I'm calling to see if you have clean underwear'*continues laughing*/Rin:Uh oh, Rebekuka!/*dies*/Rin:*shakes head*Rebekuka died laughing again...
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Reviewed By: bk On: November 12, 2004 07:37 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hooray your back. I am glad you are back and with 2 chapters no less. They are great as always. I hope you keep updating because I really like this story and missed it while you were gone. Thanks for the updates.
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Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 02:47 EST Comment/Review: yeh i'm gald you updated....now i'm gunna wait for the next chapter^-^
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Title: Dang... Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 23:58 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: If I were Kagome, I wouldn't be able to give Inuyasha up to Kouga a second time around. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to more *nods* Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: November 11, 2004 22:28 EST Comment/Review: OMG How could you leave it off right there? that's just mean... but oh well.. Keep up the great work I really wanna know what happens with this story! It's one of my favs. -Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 18:20 EST Comment/Review: boot
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Title: remember me?! im the annoying loud one... Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (no logged on) On: November 11, 2004 18:15 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!! YOURE BACK YOURE BACK!!!! IM NOT KIDDING I WAS THINKING OF THIS FIC LAST NIGHT WONDERING IF YOU WERE GOING TO UPDATE IT OR LEAVE IT AT THE LAST CHAPTER! YAAAYY! and as always both updates were full of that frustrating drama ive missed so. the whole inu-chan in a silver thong thing was ahem intertaining haha. BUT DAMMIT KAGOME!!!! WHAT THE HECK!!! why did she have to send kouga to inu?? whhhyyyyyyy??!!!!! she should just tie him to the bed and TAKE him GOD! too much sexual tension ugh. aaaanywho, THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!!! enjoyed it as always, pleeeaaassse done make me wait another wat was it, 3 months?...oh yeah, im a hypocrite....ugh. but yeah! yay!!! update update update!!! ~*~*~the miko~*~*~
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Title: yipppeee! Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:34 EST Comment/Review: Two new chapters! Ah, but the cliffie... can't wait for the next installment. :) Joy
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Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:18 EST Comment/Review: vboot
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:08 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay!!! I've been in withdrawl from this fic!! Seriously, claw marks on the walls, whole nine yards :) Glad you updated, keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 21:36 EDT Comment/Review: Plz UPDATE!!!!! i havent heard from this story in a long time!!! update really really soon!!!
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Title: Jeeze Louize!!!!!! Reviewed By: KikyoKiller (not signed in) On: October 30, 2004 21:08 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I AM GOING TO FREAKING KILL YOU, YOU EVIL BITCH!!! YOU FUCKING NEED TO FUCKING UPDATE YOU STUPID FUCKING FUCKER!!!!!! DAMMIT, IF YOU DON'T UPDATE I AM GOING TO FUCKING KILL YOU!!!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 23:15 EDT Comment/Review: I had more to write, but I ran out of room. Here's the rest ------> // Now I know that this is a huge story, and if I had as much as you had written, I wouldn't want to go back and change the whole thing either. My suggestion is that, in your future projects, you focus more on the content and quality of your plot and story structure, rather than how long you can make your story. Some of the best work I've read are short stories. Size doesn't matter. It's what you do with it that counts. lol
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