| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Reviewed By: IzzYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 20:40 EDT
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woah...sorry it posted so many times...-_-''
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Title: HAA~
Reviewed By: IzzYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You...left it at a cliffhaner. *dies* x__X Good chapter all the same, however. ^_^ UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ^_^ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You...left it at a cliffhaner. *dies* x__X Good chapter all the same, however. ^_^ UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ^_^ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You...left it at a cliffhaner. *dies* x__X Good chapter all the same, however. ^_^ UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ^_^ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You...left it at a cliffhaner. *dies* x__X Good chapter all the same, however. ^_^ UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(off) On: May 17, 2004 20:11 EDT
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UPDATE NOW!!!! IM NOT GOING TO BE ABLE TO READ IT CUZ MY COMPUTER IS GOING TO BE GONE FOR THREE WEEKS PLEASE!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HEPPEN!!!!!! PLEASE TELL ME RIGHT NOW AND START TYPING AND GET IT READY PRETTY PLEASE EVERYONE IS WAITING!
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Reviewed By: camintmier (too lazy to sign in) On: May 17, 2004 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wonder what'll be Inuyasha's present to Kagome. It's awesome that you've got Kagome able to play the guitar. Do you play any instruments or sing? I don't play, but I sing a little (mainly at karaoke parties with friends). Please write the next chapter soon, as I'm on pins and needles waiting to find out what Inu's present is. (Please hurry, these pins and needles hurt... :p lol)
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Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: May 16, 2004 23:45 EDT
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great chapters!
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 21:04 EDT
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Ok, this is good, but isn't InuYasha supposed to fall for Kagome? I mean, Kagome is falling head over heels for Inu but he's still thinking that Kouga is the one he should be with. I know its not easy to just forget your boyfriend, but I thought the title was 'Falling for the Babysitter' not 'Babysitter falling for Employer'!!
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Reviewed By: .....9 On: May 16, 2004 20:26 EDT
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: May 16, 2004 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hah! go kagome! inuyasha deserves being punched in the nards after how he treats kagome, and plays with her heart. hell, he deserves to be castrated for that matter. i like kouga, hes getting better. so, you gonna have kagome play her guiter for everyone next chaoter, sing some song she wrote, and reveal some underlaying message in it to inuyasha? lo, watever u do, ill be happy with...wel almost anything. anywho! update soon! (not that u dont already have a good habit of it) ;) ~*~*~suteki~*~*~
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Title: 100!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Once again...I know what you're thinkind, stupid Serena's back... On: May 16, 2004 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen, I just had to!/Rin:She use to do that on some other boards too./The Harry Potter boards, we'd throw parties for the author, they had little icons like coffee and brownies./Rin: Rin tried to eat one.../They were better when my mom made them and while I put up the icon, I'd take a bite. Everyone would be jealous.../Rin:Didn't you say one of those you go to is having a party?/ They'd tll me to go away again./ Rin:Oh.../Yeah, thanks for not kicking me off like all the others!/Rin:Arigatou! Brownie?*holds up a chocolate brownie*
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Reviewed By: ...You know me... On: May 16, 2004 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin:Does Rin act like Mayu?/No, you're not sweet enough, but you love to give me headaches./Rin:Good!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 15:09 EDT
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I think Kagome should start acting more like an adult than a spoiled child who isn't getting their way. She says such inappropriate things around the kids, I mean does she want them saying such foul language as well. She's blaming everyone about her situation, but she put herself there in the first place. And it's like she doesn't want to heal, since she keeps fighting with InuYasha. She's getting on my nerves! She needs to grow up!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 04:31 EDT
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Nice Chapter. But Houjo must have really done something wrong to Kagome to get a reaction like that.
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