| "Falling For the Baby Sitter" Reviews/Comments [ 469 ] |
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Reviewed By: Patsita On: May 09, 2004 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why you people are all confused made perfect sense...she likes him okay? o and pleease tell me your not stopping it here!!!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
End? Fuckin hell no! You'd better not!/Rin:Rebekuka!/*sticks out tounge* Nahhh!
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Title: OOOOOO_____OOOOOOO
Reviewed By: IzzYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I hyperventalated..... THIS IS THE END?!?!?!? YOU ENDED THE FIC, RIGHT THERE?!?!! HOW IN THE SEVEN HELLS COULD YOU DO THAT TO US LOYAL FANS AND REVIEWERS?!?! Oh my gods...I think...I am...hyperventalating again. IS THIS THE END?!!? PLEASE, PLEASE, P.L.E.A.S.E~! tell me that is not the end!!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 16:16 EDT
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I don't understand this chapter at all! What does Kagome mean when she says, "it's because I think like you a lot."?!
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 15:56 EDT
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Ok, what is this supposed to mean? She flinched at his tone, a hurt look crossing her face and she lowered her gaze to the ground. "It's... because I think like you... a lot..." she said, her voice lowered considerably. Does that mean she thinks like him? She thinks she likes him? Just a bit confussing. I was reading and all of this was the only thing that confussed me. Please clarify. What does that mean? I'm not trying to be anal, I just want to make sure that I understood your meaning.
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(off) On: May 04, 2004 15:40 EDT
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IS THIS THE END?!!?!?!?!?!?!???!??!?!?!?!??!?! YOU'RE DAMN RIGHT THAT WE'RE GOING TO KILL YOU IF THIS IS THE END!! TELL ME IT'S NOT, I LOVE THIS FIC TOO MUCH!!! OH COMMON GUYS!!! PLEASE!? PRETTY PLEASE?! And if not for me for everyone else who love this fic!
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Reviewed By: camintmier (too lazy to sign in) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Can't wait to read more. I hope Bryan got help with his little "problem" somehow. Lol. Oh well, it happens to the best of us. This is a great story. I wonder how its gonna turn out... Also, on a side note, I was wondering how you knew so much about vampiric clubs, and things like that. Sorry if I'm being nosy. Oh well. Have fun :E
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Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: May 03, 2004 23:27 EDT
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uhhh.... uhh!! DONT STOP THERE!!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (not online) On: May 03, 2004 22:51 EDT
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hold on! you mean that was the last chapter???????????????????? thats not fair! *pouts and sniffles* and it was getting so good too. well....i guess it wasnt too bad of an ending anyways, im not disappointed. but i thought that he was going to FALL for her in the end. i dont know, its not my story, so whatever you do with it is good with me. thanks for the entertainment! ;) ~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~*~
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Reviewed By: LSIE(offline) On: May 03, 2004 21:57 EDT
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Interesting. How long are you planning on making this fic??
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(off) On: May 03, 2004 18:23 EDT
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is this story a inu/kouga pairing? If it is... it's okay... it's your call. But. If it is...who's kag paired with? Anyways! I LOVE YOUR STORY!! CAN YOU PLESE ANSWER MY QUESTION?!
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Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: May 03, 2004 17:27 EDT
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^___________________________________^ me likey this chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (for some reason cant stay logged on for long) On: May 03, 2004 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the mall thing was pretty cool. kagome throwing her shoe at sesshie reminded me of austin powers, lol. 'who throws shoes?' (dont remember the line perfectly) bring on the kinky vampire stuff! is there gonna be anymore inu/kag vamp action? i hope so, it was pretty hot last time, lol. your corupting me! im reading a story with gay vampire feaks! lol, jk, i love your story. the scene with nazuna and kag was pretty stinkin funny. hurry and update! me wanna see vamp party! ~*~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~*~*~
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 06:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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its depressing but its good. the vampire thingy was pretty exciting (another thing im new too) you sure know a lot about horses i noticed, and everclear. damn, everclear is NOT something u can drink straight easily. i took a shot of it (for 5 bucks) and the stuff nearly melted my throat away, lol. strong shit right there. its good! cant wait to see what happens at the vamp party thing. update soon! please! hehe. ;) ~*~*~*~*SUTEKI~*~*~*~
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Reviewed By: Patsita On: May 02, 2004 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic~! keep it up!
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