| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 15:31 CDT
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Waaaaahhhh!!! Awww, I feel so bad for her....NOT!! GO CHIBI YAMI ATEN!!! Damn, at least Marik had enough control to have Malik leave before he got hurt! He has to die??? Not coolies. But... Anyways, Bakura's daddy is going to visit????? Lord, have mercy! Waiting patently for updates...
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: August 04, 2004 14:58 CDT
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Bakura and Marik must be brought back from the dead, in order to be saved. I really really really don't like Tristan's brother... he's evil! Stupid narrow minded people... Why must people be like that. Reality is such a harsh and cruel place..
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: August 04, 2004 02:07 CDT
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That was fun! YAY ROBBIE! ^_^ *huggles him* Aria sounds scary when she goes yami. Can't wait for the next duel. gtg. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Angel Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was loving the ass whoppings in this chapter! Aten went Chibi Marik! Poor Aria, she hurt her boyfriend. I really hope Aten kicks Rhonda's ass tomorrow. I can't stand the little itchbay! * Ryou plushie nodds and frowns. Whispers something in Angel's ear* Yes, I know Marik has a lovely ass. I also know that you want them both badly. If you ask bakurasgirl nice and sweetly, she might write you all together. ( Ryou plushie talking now) I need 'Kura. Can you write Malik, Marik and I...um *blushes* ...um making love? I miss my yami so much...* starts tearing up* Please can you do it for me...Ryou?*gives big kawaii chibi eyes* Awwww! Isn't he so cute? Again thank you for Ryou!Need MORE!!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story still going great. lol I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in some time. I haven't been feeling to well and this last weekend. I spendt my time in the hosptial. But reading my favor fanfiction always seem to make me feel better. I can't wait for you to up date.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: August 03, 2004 03:24 CDT
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Ohhh that chapter rocked! Two people who deserved to win! But too bad Aria ahd to break loose, I hope Umi's okay, and that he forgives her! ARIA ROCKS THE PARTY! Go girls! Girl power! ...a flash back to the spice girls...eep! Anywho had good times reading this chaptyer at 1:22 in the morning lol. I hope Aten kicks some serious butt because that brat needs it. Not to mention I thought it was kidna funy, Eric's mom all being like 'he's cheating' and acting like her son is always innocent and everything. I swear people like that deserve each other, I guess she just had to give him the influence..anywho happiness all around anyway because this chapter was cool!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: August 02, 2004 16:58 CDT
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Awww, Poor Umi!! *squishes Umi* chibi mako! Yes! Eric went down.. normally, I don't like people suffering, but Eric deserved what he got. They found a cure?? Will it bring Bakura back? Baku... we neeeeeeed yooooooooooooou
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: August 02, 2004 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha-o!!! ARIA ROCKS!!! Her duel was soooo cool!!! I hope Aten's duel is twice as good. And I also hope that Rhonda gets beaten in the worst way possible; She needs to be taught her place!!! *waves a banner that says (*~^ GO ATEN ^~*
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: August 02, 2004 15:43 CDT
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Ha-o!!! ARIA ROCKS!!! Her duel was soooo cool!!! I hope Aten's duel is twice as good. And I also hope that Rhonda gets beaten in the worst way possible; She needs to be taught her place!!! *waves a banner that says (*~^ GO ATEN ^~*
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins(not logged in) On: August 02, 2004 14:31 CDT
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Great dueling chappie! Usually I just scroll right past them 'cause I think they're boring, but I decided to read this, and is was perfect! I feel bad for Aria and Umi, but go Aten! Sorry I haven't been reviewing in a long while (I was on vacaton last week though). I really loved this!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 13:42 CDT
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The song I sent the lyrics too was the one. It's complicated. Anyways, this chappie was too cool!! Poor Umi though. I hope he forgives Aria. She took it pretty hard. The whole pre-duel conversation was just too cute. I could just see Aria standing there, arms crossed, rolling her eyes the whole time. I love how easily Robbie beat Eric! Too cool! Losers always loose! And Eric is a giant loser!! Wonderful chappie as always!!! Can't wait till next chappie!! Why do I see it being Aria v Aten for the finals????? Lady Elfskye
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Reviewed By: lost light On: August 02, 2004 10:18 CDT
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hey love your storie and sorry for my last review i made it was reeeal wired so inm're writing it and im more awake thanks for ttthe plushie snugglees . youu no yami needs too be punished to he isn't he is just as bad . two bad thosse to can't be nice too each other arre you going to bring them back to life soon.see ya
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Reviewed By: AngelHoshi (AngelRavenDove) On: August 02, 2004 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank You for the Ryou plushie!Thank You for the Ryou plushie! *holds it like Aria holds the Dark Mishin* Good Chappie! Good Story! My friend is interested in your story. I was telling her about the bashing scenes and she was cracking up! her name is tutseti. Need more chappies in the fic called Ride The Crime Wave I want to see what all happens. It's funny trying to imagine Mako as violent. * Squeezes Ryou plushie* WRITING IS LIKE FRIENDSHIP BEACAUSE WE GAIN FRIENDS BY KILLING OFF/TORTURING EACH OTHERS MOST HATED CHARACTER! YEAH FRIENDSHIP!!! lol! Must KILL Anzu now! Bai-Bai!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 22:03 CDT
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Ok, as to the lyrics, I always run my realplayer while I'm online, and that song happened to come up as I was typing the review for the previous chappie. So, I really don't know if you'll be able to chappie it, and it really is more of a Ryou POV than of Aten, but thinking of Aten, his father, Jessica, the way Kura was, etc. Ok, On to this chappie!! First, I love the exchange in the bathroom, Poor Seto!! Go Mokie!! Gettin some in the shadows!! Poor Ryou! Kura will be back, have no fear!! The comment from Seto about the nursury was funny!! And Aria at the exhibit was cute!!! And Anzu was as, well, I want to say retarded as ever, but...whatever. She makes even the most mentally insane look completely normal!! And the next chappie is so gonna rock!! Just, don't let Umi feel to bad when Aria wipes the deck with him!!! And Eric needs to get caught cheating or something. After Robbie kicks his a$$!! Lady Elfskye
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Reviewed By: Valea On: July 31, 2004 01:28 CDT
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ahhhhhh!!! I can't take it! I'm on a cute streak! Just watched chobits and I was like wanting to squish the life out of everyone! It was so great! Cause Aten rocks the party! You wanna know why? Because he's a darn good artist and I love him! *squishes him* KAWAII!!!!! Soemthign how ever that was NOT kawaii!!! Anzu jumping around liek a maniac! That was all negative, damn her, going off, making people pass out, cant have NAY common decientcy for other people, but of course her brain is too small to comprehend! But anyway!!!!! i was toally digging this chapter, and liked the fact Aten painted a picture of Rhea, because that was cool...Seto getting sick never gets old. As sad as it is...muwhahahaha...VAGINA!!!!!! BUWHAHAHAH!!!!!!!I wanna go bra shopping with Ryou and aria and Miranda! We can Ryou a bra though he doesn't need one, and I need a new one becasue all mine are dying!!! Okay that's enough outa me, laters! This was ever so tight!!! (tight as in cool....yeah)
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