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 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye(too sad to log in)  On: July 26, 2004 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can't write, crying to hard. Too sad. Must stop crying long enough to kill Yami. Again. *sobs in corner* Lady Elfskye
 Reviewed By: valea  On: July 26, 2004 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
*kills her VERY PAINFULLY* grrrr!! WHYY!!! Why must you choose to be so cruel! I acatully cried for this one! AND IT HURT! *brings her back and slices her into small pieces with a chainsaw!* RAWR!!! *sniffles* Why again! Why mushe have to suffer Yami's evil stinkin's pain again! Hey maybe Rhea will save him..but you won't be that nice will you? And by thte way I'v eheard that song and it did go very well! But it will still take me a long time to forgive you! wahhh! badness...bakura dying equals BADNESS!!! well written though..*runs away crying*
 Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper  On: July 26, 2004 16:03 CDT
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¬_¬ I think.... I dunno what weapon yet.. It's gonna be painful though... Poor Bakura! T_T He shouldn't have to go through that again... Poor.. everybody.. Marik, realizing the death of Aten ( you do that, I'll hurt those you care about.. ¬_¬... no killing off Aten... ¬_¬) Ryou, losing Bakura... Aria and Aten.. losing a dad... it's just not fair...... ^_^ Keep up the great work! lol
 Reviewed By: Moshi Moshi Neko  On: July 26, 2004 10:37 CDT
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*eating chocolate and sobbing* Poor Baku-sama... placed at the hands of Yami... I never really expected it to end like that for him.. *sniffle*
 Reviewed By: yami no miko  On: July 24, 2004 16:57 CDT
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IIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KURA-KUN CAN'T DIE!!!!! THATS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MEAN!!!!!!! ITS UNFAIR!!!!!!!!! *cries unhappily*
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: July 24, 2004 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That ch was awesome! Very well written. So sad, but sweet. Beautiful. I almost cried, but I had to contain myself or my sister will be like what are u doing? lol. I had to lighten the mood. I won't kill you, or else I won't have anyone to write the rest of the story. heh heh. Till next time then. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Moshi Moshi Neko  On: July 24, 2004 10:57 CDT
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*squeals* Thank you for the plushies! *huggles* My other favourites are Hato chiisai and Redconvoy. Now, onto you're chapter... I'm not gonna kill you. Then who would write the fiction? Naw... I'll just strangle my teddy for a while and then cry.Then have some chocolate and then cry some more. Eheh.. I'm a very emotional lady, 'specially when it comes to my favourite characters dieing. Poor Baku-sama... *sniffle* So sad...
 Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2004 05:43 CDT
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Never before have I ever read something as well-written as this chapter. The chapter is so touching, and it actually made me cry, which is something that is not common. Bakura's knowing that his demise is soon, and making love to him one last time, and the sunset and sunrise was so sweet. I can't even imagine what Ryou is going through. I must admit, also, that setting the chapter to the particular song was a stroke of genius. I don't know that there is another song that exists that could have had the same effect as the one you used. Plus, it's Evanescence, whom I dearly love. The song is beautiful, as is the chapter. I feel deeply sorry for Aria and Aten, losing Bakura at such a young age, and everyone else, for losing a friend, a lover, a neighbor. Rhea's appearance was very well placed. For all the cliffhanger is rather evil, it is easily the most appropriate place to have cut off. Congratulations on the most amazing chapter ever written in the history of all fandom! *Hands you assorted plushies* Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2004 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, you gave me teary eyes while I'm at my mom's friends house! WHy must it be so sad?! He'e not gonna die..he's the protaganist! Well kinda htough I can't remember what that means but thats okay! I'm all shaky, he shall not die! *holds weapon* like another reviewer I'm not going to do jack to you until he actaully dies! I'm going to drown my sorrows in pasta! Excuse me..*walks off to eat pasta and dounuts while I cry* By the way..it was a good chapter regardless...of the yami that's dying!!!
 Reviewed By: Mariku182  On: July 23, 2004 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ha-o!! It's me Again!! Thank you for not calling me weird (If it where another person they'd be making fun of me) and for updating and for using my favorite song of Evanescence for the chapter!!! I can't believe that Baku-chan's dying. Please don't kill him off... (Oh yeah BTW this doesn't have to do with anything of the fanfic but; You don't like yami or you just needed a Bad guy?) Can you do some more Anzu bashing on further chapters just to lighten a bit the mood? Please and thank you One of your fan-readers Mariku182.... Do you have a cookie?
 Reviewed By: anubiset  On: July 23, 2004 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don`t know what to say. I have never read something so sad and so utterly beautiful. I don`t cry much, I`ve seen to much, but I cried like a baby, and still am as I write this.
 Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2004 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've never heard that song before... I've heard My Last Breath, but it's DEFINITELy a different song... stupid sad chapter...
 Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper  On: July 23, 2004 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
* takes the destructive weapon happily* I'm gonna save this.. 'til Bakura-kun dies.... then, you're toast... ¬_¬ You can't let Baku die! Not the preccciousss!!!! T_T I-It's.. too sad! That last love scene was SO sweet though... I almost started crying... Keep up the good work! Unless you kill off 'Kura.. then FEEL MY HIKARI WRATH! O_O *pokes you with destructive object*
 Reviewed By: Valea  On: July 22, 2004 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm late I know, but hey! I want o be squished! *stomps foot* SQUISH ME! Everyone sqish eveyrbody! *a squish party takes place* SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!! YAY! I love the robbie and aten moments, they just make my heart melt theyre so cute even though they were talking about such a sad topic *Sqiushes the world* oops!
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: July 21, 2004 20:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh no! Bakura, don't die yet! *frowns* Anyways, really great ch. Till next time. ^_~
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